Reviewer: Quill Angel
Date: 02/19/12 9:16
Chapter: Chapter 1: Wait... I Love You?

I'm reading this story for the fourth time.

Reviewer: Quill Angel
Date: 08/05/11 3:33
Chapter: Epilogue

I expected her to be a raven claw.
awesome story. it took me five days to finish it, but great job. mega interesting. :D :D :D

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing, Quill Angel! Always great to hear what people think. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. :)

Reviewer: Quill Angel
Date: 08/03/11 9:07
Chapter: Chapter 36: One Last Chance

I loved all the stories! The Fountain Of Fair Fortune was my favorite...

Reviewer: Quill Angel
Date: 08/03/11 8:22
Chapter: Chapter 34: No Differences

Criricism too?
Na, your story was too nice for that.

Author's Response: Thanks, Quill Angel! I really appreciate it. :)

Reviewer: Quill Angel
Date: 08/01/11 2:59
Chapter: Chapter 23: I've Lost Him

Was killing him off really important? whats gonna happen NOW?

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Quill Angel! And yes, I'm going to have to say that killing him off was necessary at this point. I guess you'll have to continue reading to find out what happens. Thanks again for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Quill Angel
Date: 08/01/11 0:55
Chapter: Chapter 19: I Need Some Air

Yeah, I couldnt tear myself away from the story. I kept thinking about it the whole day, wondering what was going to happen next. (!!!)

Author's Response: Thanks, Quill Angel! I'm glad you've enjoyed it thus far! :)

Reviewer: emery78
Date: 01/06/11 2:11
Chapter: Epilogue

Thank you for writing this, its the best story ive ever read on here!!! loved it all

Author's Response: Thanks, emery! I'm so glad you've enjoyed reading this so much! If you have a chance, I do recommend the sequel, Playing the Demons. Thanks again for reading and reviewing this! :)

Reviewer: Crystal99
Date: 09/17/10 9:46
Chapter: Epilogue

Everything turned out well...thank goodness. It was nice to see that after all those years Demetri and Genevieve hadn't changed much. I have to say the end was cute. Thank you for sharing this brilliant, beautiful story with us. I enjoyed reading every minute of it. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for keeping up with this story, Crystal. I'm so happy to have you as a reader and I'm happy to have been able to bring this story to you. I hope you enjoy the next story just as much. :)

Reviewer: Crystal99
Date: 09/17/10 9:35
Chapter: Chapter 39: My Life, One Year Afterwards

My feeling that Genevieve was pregnant turned out to be right. I'm so glad Demetri is home and that they're together. I adored this chapter and I'm thrilled that there's another story. I'm off to read the epilogue.

Author's Response: Thanks, Crystal! Yes, I was very surprised that you had actually guessed that! Well, good to see that everything turned out all right, yes? Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Crystal99
Date: 09/17/10 9:24
Chapter: Chapter 38: Memorable Encounters

I hope the plan will work too. I enjoyed taking the trip down memory lane with them. Nicely done, mzap. I'm off to read more. :)

Reviewer: Crystal99
Date: 09/17/10 9:08
Chapter: Chapter 37: Being With My Family, After All This Time

She better get that freedom with Demetri, too. :) I'm still hoping she will change her mind about the whole marriage thing, but I would be happy to settle for her and Demetri to be together again. Nicely done.

Author's Response: Thanks, Crystal! Yes, I think we all hope that... just somehow, Genevieve in a wedding dress is something that I can't even begin to conceive. In my mind, they incorporate every part of a married couple except for the contract and the rings and I think Genevieve is happy with just that. Thanks again for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Crystal99
Date: 09/17/10 8:57
Chapter: Chapter 36: One Last Chance

Oh, why did they have to burn the contract. I hope Diana will be able to use memories to clear Demetri's name. I'm off to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: Crystal99
Date: 09/16/10 15:57
Chapter: Chapter 35: Just When I Thought Life Was Going to Get Better…

This chapter was so sad, but I refuse to believe that Demetri will spend the rest of his life in Azkaban. They will be together...they have to. I'm dying to read more, but I have to give my eyes a rest. So I'll be back tomorrow to finish this story. So sad. :(

Author's Response: Thanks, Crystal! I'm glad you're hoping that they will end up together. They're one of my favorite couples, so it will be hard if they're apart. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Crystal99
Date: 09/16/10 15:47
Chapter: Chapter 34: No Differences

I have to agree with him...something is telling me that the battle won't end easily. I have a feeling Genevieve is pregnant again. I don't know why I have that feeling I just do. Now on with the next chapter.

Author's Response: Hmm... interesting theory about Genevieve. I will say that there is something going on with her, but won't say just what. Thanks again for reading! :)

Reviewer: Crystal99
Date: 09/16/10 15:40
Chapter: Chapter 33: My Revival

Darn it! Just when I thought they were finally going to be together something else happens. At least the contract is no longer hanging over their heads. I'm still holding out hope that everything will be fine in the end.

Reviewer: Crystal99
Date: 09/16/10 15:25
Chapter: Chapter 32: A Final Battle

I hope Genevieve will be all right. I'm glad Nathaniel is finally out of the picture. I just hope everything will turn out all right. I enjoyed reading this and now I'm off to read more of this excellent story.

Author's Response: Thanks, Crystal! Hopefully Genevieve will be okay and as for Nathaniel... well, he'll be gone for a while, but don't expect him to be gone too long. ;) (as seen by the sequel...) Thanks again for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Crystal99
Date: 09/16/10 15:17
Chapter: Chapter 30: A Plan is Formed

I realized I had some how skipped over this chapter in my haste to read more of the story. Poor Genevieve. I hope in the end she and Demetri are together and happy.

Reviewer: Crystal99
Date: 09/16/10 15:12
Chapter: Chapter 31: When My Lights Go Out

I'm going to keep this review short, because I am desperate to read the next chapter. Brilliantly written, mzap. :)

Reviewer: Crystal99
Date: 09/16/10 15:06
Chapter: Chapter 29: Bad Boy, My Ass

Lol, Teddy related to Demetri. That's a good one. Demetri has gone soft. :) I wonder why Genevieve is so opposed to the idea of marriage. Thank you for mentioning Dobby. I miss that little elf. Nicely done, mzap. I'm off to read the next chapter. Now that I've picked this story back up again I can't seem to stop reading. :)

Author's Response: Lol, it is true. It was a fact that I had to mention on here in one way or another. :P Genevieve just doesn't like the idea of staying tied to one person forever. She would feel enclosed and would end up fighting it to no end. And yes, Demetri has gone soft. I'm so glad you're enjoying this and thank you for taking the time to read it! :)

Reviewer: Crystal99
Date: 09/16/10 14:56
Chapter: Chapter 28: The Truth Behind It All

I hope their plan works. I have a horrible feeling that Nathaniel will discover the truth and that wouldn't be good. Well I'm off to read the next chapter. Nicely done, mzap :)

Author's Response: I agree with you that I hope the plan works. Would be nice to have everything work out again, right? Thanks for reading and reviewing, Crystal! :)

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