Really enjoyed the first two chapters here! Hopefully you update it soon!
Author's Response: Oh, Lordy, not sure when, which is a shame as I know exactly how this pans out. I shall try but can't promise anything. Thank you for reviewing. ~Carole~
your stories are the best! Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I REALLY should finish this one.
This story is off to a great start! I don't want to intrude upon your story but I think that if you used a few flashbacks to the Marauder days you could develop the characters even further.
Author's Response: If I ever finish this, then maybe I will. The point really with Sirius is that he can't remember much as still suffering from the effects of Azkaban. Thanks for reviewing ~Carole~
hope u continue it is a very nice story pls update
Author's Response: Oh thank you. Yes, I've been very bad with this story, I really should update because I know what's going to happen as well. Thanks again ~Carole~
it is a yery promising story i like it alot
Author's Response: Thnak you. I may even get around to finishing it ... sorry!
nice tale, but it doesn't seem finished. Is there going to be more?
Author's Response: Thank you. Yes there should be more, but I've got bogged down with my other fics, so I haven't updated for quite a while. Glad you liked it. ~Carole~
Author's Response: Thank you. Yes there should be more, but I've got bogged down with my other fics, so I haven't updated for quite a while. Glad you liked it. ~Carole~
I liked this chapter a lot and I would like to know more about this story. Hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Oh, I will update, This is kinda my indulgence story and I love thinking about it. Hopefully I shall kick start it and finish it very soon. Thank you for reviewing. Carole xxx
eck... this is soo bizarre... I just saw ur answer at the same time I was hearing u read about walking
Author's Response: Mmm, I get around a bit...
Wohoo... awesome chapter. Loved how u portrayed Sirius and the "Harley-Queen" part was very amusing... although i wonder who is Harley, besides the parrot, that is
Author's Response: Ahh, that's reference to a Harley Davidson - a very, very cool motor bike. I think it's what Sirius would have ridden. Thanks for the review. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Carole,
I know I told you what I thought of this when I beta'd it, but I just couldn't resist telling you again how much I do love this story.
I did notice a couple things. First, “Diffindio!”he said There should be a space after the quotation mark. Second, why I shouldn’t shop you now?” This may be one of those pesky British phrases, but should it be shop or shoot? Shoot makes more sense to me. I can't believe I didn't question it when I beta'd this. LOL
And finally, I would like to tell you my favourite line of this chapter, “Merlin,” he muttered to himself. “They never used to threaten me with guns. I must have lost my touch.” I can see my one true love actually thinking this. It is so Sirius.
Great work as always.
Terri
Author's Response: Ah, thanks Terri. No, I meant'shop'. It means to turn someone in, um 'rat' on someone, I guess in your USA slang. I'm glad you liked that line, I had fun writing it.
I shall fix that line as soon as poss.
Carole xxx
Great start! Looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: I'm pleased you enjoyed this. The second chapter is with my beta so hopefully will be ready soon. Thanks for the review. Carole xxx
