A short first chapter left me wanting more. It is starting with good romance. I really liked this part.
"It was as though thousands of Snitches were fluttering inside him. "
I always enjoyed the idea of everyone going back the following year to finish school. I'm really curious to find out who the old enemy is that returns to Hogwarts. Can't wait.
Author's Response: Congrats! You left me my first review!! Thanks! I'm glad you like the first chapter, and I'll post the second one as soon as possible.