Reviews For More Than A Memory
Reviewer: Harmthuria
Date: 07/25/13 11:35
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Awakening

Seriously, when will you be putting/finishing the next chapters? This has been posted years ago, and I'm still anxious for the rest.

Reviewer: accio_beca
Date: 02/24/12 11:14
Chapter: Chapter 1: Prologue

Please carry on writing it!! I really want to see what happens :)

Reviewer: Hermione Granger Weasley
Date: 01/19/11 13:58
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Awakening

You should write more of this! I have waited for it for months! Don't give it up, please.

Reviewer: bookworm4eva
Date: 01/12/11 13:39
Chapter: Chapter 1: Prologue

ohhh i reallllyy like this stroy!! :)
can't wait till the next chapter comes out :)
do you have any idea when it could? or...

Reviewer: harrypottergurl
Date: 05/11/10 14:48
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Awakening

That was great! Let me know when the next chapter comes out.

Reviewer: harrypottergurl
Date: 05/11/10 14:25
Chapter: Chapter 1: Prologue

The 1st chapter was great!

Reviewer: alyssa_S
Date: 08/10/09 3:33
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Awakening

hi! i really like your story so far, i hope that the update is not to far away.

Reviewer: Hedwig_is_my_owl
Date: 07/27/09 15:12
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Awakening

:) I am enjoying this so far..I hope you update soon!

Reviewer: Windy Silvermist
Date: 06/11/09 17:45
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Awakening

Aww jeez stop there will ya? Gosh you better write more or particuraly bad reviews will mysteriously appear here if you get my drift. Write more that's all I say. Wonderful but a rather nasty cliffie.

Reviewer: Willz
Date: 05/16/09 7:28
Chapter: Chapter 1: Prologue

Brilliant story so far, when will you next update?

Reviewer: Ginny4life
Date: 04/17/09 18:22
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Awakening

That was freaking awesome dude, can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: LB22
Date: 04/14/09 5:56
Chapter: Chapter 1: Prologue

Please please please update this fix! It's Compelling

Reviewer: potterfan48
Date: 03/19/09 3:22
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Awakening

I find the premise of your story intriguing. I have read many fics that involved time travel, but the problem with changing the timeline and history make them awkward. This premise lends itself to a whole new set of possibilities. One thing possibility that seemd intriguing to me would be that James and Lily came back to help Harry in his quest and are only among the living until Voldmort is defeated, then they return to the dead.

I know you don't need me giving you plots for your own story. Keep on writing! I didn't think that the chapter was very confusing. I have read stories so filled with general Angst and pain, that I wasn't really sure who was in the fic except they were having a miserable time.

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 03/18/09 19:15
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Awakening

i love the premise for the story can't wait to see where you take it, and for the next chapter.

Reviewer: ezaz8
Date: 03/18/09 18:26
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Awakening

LOVE IT! cant wait to see what happens next! update soon pretty pretty please!

Reviewer: gweasley95
Date: 03/18/09 16:53
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Awakening

This chapter was just as good as the first one! I loved it and I hope you update again soon.

Reviewer: Ginny4life
Date: 02/27/09 20:31
Chapter: Chapter 1: Prologue

sweet that was totaly wicked

Reviewer: emmajain
Date: 01/28/09 4:21
Chapter: Chapter 1: Prologue

its cool
cant wait to read the next one...

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 01/27/09 17:16
Chapter: Chapter 1: Prologue

An intrigueing first chapter, I cannot wait to see how this story develops. Good job :-)

Reviewer: helz_belz
Date: 01/27/09 4:22
Chapter: Chapter 1: Prologue

What an intriguing start to a story. I really interested to see where you go with this. I really loved the feeling of the last line.... for the first time since it was a seedling, blossoms appeared on the tree’s lower branches. What a great way to end a chapter.

Just one little thing in the sentence; At first, Sirius refused to believe that they were dead, but finally agreed, however heartbrokenly, that Lily and James were dead. I'd change the second dead to 'they were gone' or 'it was true' to avoid repeating the word dead. Great Prologue :)

Author's Response: Thank you.
As for the advice, you're right. I didn't even see that when I checked it over for the last time. Thanks! ~Aubrey

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