Please carry on writing it!! I really want to see what happens :)
You should write more of this! I have waited for it for months! Don't give it up, please.
ohhh i reallllyy like this stroy!! :)
can't wait till the next chapter comes out :)
do you have any idea when it could? or...
That was great! Let me know when the next chapter comes out.
The 1st chapter was great!
hi! i really like your story so far, i hope that the update is not to far away.
:) I am enjoying this so far..I hope you update soon!
Aww jeez stop there will ya? Gosh you better write more or particuraly bad reviews will mysteriously appear here if you get my drift. Write more that's all I say. Wonderful but a rather nasty cliffie.
Brilliant story so far, when will you next update?
That was freaking awesome dude, can't wait for the next chapter
Please please please update this fix! It's Compelling
I find the premise of your story intriguing. I have read many fics that involved time travel, but the problem with changing the timeline and history make them awkward. This premise lends itself to a whole new set of possibilities. One thing possibility that seemd intriguing to me would be that James and Lily came back to help Harry in his quest and are only among the living until Voldmort is defeated, then they return to the dead.I know you don't need me giving you plots for your own story. Keep on writing! I didn't think that the chapter was very confusing. I have read stories so filled with general Angst and pain, that I wasn't really sure who was in the fic except they were having a miserable time.
i love the premise for the story can't wait to see where you take it, and for the next chapter.
LOVE IT! cant wait to see what happens next! update soon pretty pretty please!
This chapter was just as good as the first one! I loved it and I hope you update again soon.
its cool
cant wait to read the next one...
An intrigueing first chapter, I cannot wait to see how this story develops. Good job :-)
What an intriguing start to a story. I really interested to see where you go with this. I really loved the feeling of the last line.... for the first time since it was a seedling, blossoms appeared on the tree’s lower branches. What a great way to end a chapter.
Just one little thing in the sentence; At first, Sirius refused to believe that they were dead, but finally agreed, however heartbrokenly, that Lily and James were dead. I'd change the second dead to 'they were gone' or 'it was true' to avoid repeating the word dead. Great Prologue :)
Author's Response: Thank you.
As for the advice, you're right. I didn't even see that when I checked it over for the last time. Thanks! ~Aubrey
very nice, Aubrey!! I like the thought of James and Lily living. and the Oak tree is genius!!! felicitations on your first story!!
Author's Response: Aww, thanks! =] Just to let you in on a little secret, the Oak tree and the dissapeearing bodies didn't come into my head and the story until this was rejected thrice and the mod said to make it more original. =P Second Chapter is getting betaed and rebeataed. Check back soon! ~Aubrey
