Reviewer: Emerald Fox
Date: 06/17/10 1:51
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very interesting... it's a lovely thought...

Reviewer: wistful_sage
Date: 04/19/09 9:28
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hey there :)

I loved the story!! :D Came upon it by pure chance while doing a google search for your beta (she beta'ed a story of mine too and I was wondering if she had an ID that I was supposed to include!) and I'm really happy that I did, because it's a great story! :D

Well anyway, so coming back to the story, I loved the scene between James and Snape, especially the part where Snape asked if James was going to take him to meet Sirius, and James' answer to it. *lol* How many more years do Sirius and Regulus need to patch up?!!

And wow, this has never ever happened to me before, but there were actually tears in my eyes when Snape was overwhelmed with emotions in the story on seeing Lily!! It was such a ... er ... I can't describe how good the scene was, sorry, but it WAS really nice, and well, to conclude lamely, it was a beautiful piece! :)

Author's Response: I am so happy that this story touched you. I my goal was to write a beautiful story. the world needs more beauty. Thank for your heartening review.

Reviewer: linnealovegood
Date: 01/28/09 19:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

this is amazing! iove it.

Reviewer: minervassister
Date: 01/27/09 12:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was great. Really enjoyed it.
We all have a soft spot for poor old Sev.
Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you. Its nice to know I am not the only "Snape Softie" on the planet.

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 01/26/09 22:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was beautiful! I absolutely loved it, it was so what I would hope for. James apologizing and Lily forgiving and thanking Severus for protecting Harry.
Thank you for a wonderful tale!
It was perfect! :0)

Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed the story. Snape was such a tragic figure. I just wanted one moment of happiness for him.

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 01/26/09 16:27
Chapter: Chapter 1

Glad you put his reconcilation with James before he met Lily.

Author's Response: Thank you. That was important. He had to forgive James or he would never have been able to forgive himself.

Reviewer: decdraft
Date: 01/25/09 18:27
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was awesome

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: RenCloudkicker
Date: 01/25/09 16:04
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hmmm, can I say "WOW"? I hardly expected to be about Snape's afterlife and reconciliation. I was already intrigued when you began the story from Snape's point of view. I was thinking, oh this will be interesting, and it only got better. I think it's an original idea and i look forward to what's next.

Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed the story. It took me a month to get it down to what I thought would make sense. My beta reader helped too. but... as for what happens next I think that was best described in the last chaper of The Last Battle by C. S. Lewis. I could never do justice to what lies beyond.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/25/09 15:29
Chapter: Chapter 1

Beautifully written.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: FireboltCrasher
Date: 01/25/09 14:19
Chapter: Chapter 1

Aww, this story is really good. I like your writing style.

Author's Response: Thank you it was the first thing I ever wrote for other people to read outside of high school assignments

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 01/25/09 13:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

*tear* i'm glad snape got a happy ending :-)

Author's Response: yeah it was nice to give him a happy ending he really got the raw deal.

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