Reviews For A Field of Flowers
Reviewer: thisgrangergirlrocks
Date: 01/27/09 20:12
Chapter: The Decision

This sounds intriguing. I hope you continue the story. I am a little confused about the third person narrative being injected with a sudden first person view. Are we Hermione? Or is this a narrative?

Author's Response: Thank you for your compliment! In response to your question, I tried to format it the best that I can the way JK Rowling does it. For example, in the Harry Potter books, she doesn't use "I" with Harry, but rather she tells the story through Harry without going into first person. Yes, this story is in Hermione's point of view, but it's not in first person. If I haven't answered your question thoroughly enough, just let me know.

Reviewer: Love_Snape
Date: 01/25/09 17:44
Chapter: The Decision

"Remember you mission". You have a misspelling it should your. Other than that it was a really good chapter and add a new chapter to it. You have a very good start to your story.
Ariel

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
Waning by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
The light and warmth are waning as winter approaches. What that implies depends...
Helpless by Oregonian 3rd-5th Years
With Lord Voldemort firmly established at Malfoy Manor, and terror pervading...
Strangers at Drakeshaugh by Northumbrian 3rd-5th Years
The locals in a sleepy corner of the Cheviot Hills are surprised to discover...
FEATURED
Thank you for your time, Professor by Equinox Chick 1st-2nd Years
It is April 1976, and Minerva McGonagall sits in her office, arranging biscuits...
Heat of the Moment by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor Professors
A night of paperwork, coffee, and burning the midnight oil... it wasn't...
A Splendid Fate by hestiajones 6th-7th Years
One failed photograph, two halved souls, and the numerous, marvellous machinations...
CATEGORIES