Very mysterious! I like all the arguments going on! Nice work! Keep it up!
I cried! Im a sap. I like the story so far...:)
and we all know how that trial will turn out hehe
oooooo, go percy, go percy, go percy. he not the worm we thought him to be after all.
Wow. This is making me cry. Can't hardly see the screen. LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!
Excellent story. Very well thought out and equally well written. I have to wonder how the sequel will progress with Harry being so massively powerful at the beginning of it. I like your explanation for how Dunbledore always seemed to know more than possible about the happenings in Hogwarts. Well done and I look forward to the sequel.
Interesting. When he calls on the green fire to cast the Patronus it comes out as a phoenix? Could this affect his animagus transformation? I guess I'll just have to keep reading to find out. Excellent story so far.
My hat's off to you (or it would be if I wore a hat) for another fine chapter. I was especially empressed with the sorting hat song. Very well done.
Strong emotion is hard to write well. You did it wonderfully.
Excellent beginning. Now it's time to binge on the rest of it.
something seems to be wrong with this particular chapter. it may just be my computer, but it appears to be crooked.
up till now i have absolutely loved your fan fic. it is one of my favorites
This is a great story. Really loved it. Going off to read the sequel now. Sorry, not in the mood to leave a long review.
I love your whole story and it is amazing how you added romance, humor, general fic. , etc. and it was all perfectly balanced.
I love your whole story and it is amazing how you added romance, humor, general fic. , etc. and it was all perfectly balanced.
Uh-oh...-has dirty thought and shakes head to rid self of terrible mental image-
Oh my God (sorry, Jesus). Such an evil cliffie!!!!
Er.....no offense, but I've found quite a few mispelled words in here...
In the last line, bright is spelled "brght" and when Harry asks Colin about the stealing girlfriend thing, you spelled girlfriend "girlfiend".
Argh. That's all I can say, "Argh".