Yay! They found out they love each other!!!! Now we just have to wait for Harry and Ginny!!
I'm crying here!! I feel so bad for Harry! :(
I'm glad those things never changed!
Yay, Ron and hermione are together! This story just get better and better...
Aw...that was so sad yet so good..i imagine that's exacty how Sirius's wil would have been like.
I'm re-reading this again since I love this fanfic so much. I would also wondering if you would like to write a fanfic about Sirius coming back through the veil. I am only asking my fav. fanfic writer's to do this.
Devoted to you,
OK, the story is good, but there are two things I'd like to point out.
1. The green fire only appeared when Harry was enraged enough to kill, so it wouldn't appear every other second.
2. "Alright" has one L. I'm sorry, it's just been bothering me and I'm kinda anal retentive about things like that.
Great story! i can't wait to read the sequel. I hope u write more stories. And once again great story.
OMG this story was so cute i really enjoyed it...keep up the good work!
I loved it thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i absollutely loved this story!
it mite even be my favorite fanfic and thats high praise!
This is the BEST FAN FIC I HAVE READ IN MY LIFETIME(which, by the way, is 11 years and 7 months)!!!!!!!! You are a brilliant author!!!!!!!!!!!! write another one...or expand.....PLEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hi very good story i started to read this like a year ago and now i came back and finished it :)
I liked it., And, noce again, Sirius has humor! Great story. Oh, and please do not say that, if you mention Draco, he has blue eyes. Gray, people! Gray! (Same goes for oLuna)
that was such a good story! and i still can't believe that it had a whomping 50 chapters!! thats like the longest story i've ever read! but it was really great though! KEEP WRITING !!
I said that i would discuss the finer points of this chapter and the last in this review, but i really dont think thats necessary. This was an awesome chapter i give it a 100/10. This has undoubtedly been the one of the BEST fics ibe ever read. Great job you're an awesome writer. Look for my reviews on your sequel. I think ill go read it now...
I noticed that i forgot to put quotations around the quote (that sounds weird) by Cartman...hope you dont mind the double post
Whoa...that was...incredible...I cant find the words but i do not think that i need any to tell you how i feel about this last piece of...well i think that it deserves to be called a work of art or an extraordinary piece of literature. There have only been a handfull of moments in my (comparativley short) life in which i have felt an unusual wordless communication with an author through his (or her) work...this chapter has been one of those moments. I do not believe that many people could carry a story out so perfectly and see it culminate to a climax so wonderfully in the end. Many authors (even the more reknown ones like Steven King) simply...i dunno...poop out in the end of thier story. They destroy the point in which the climax is supposed to be and then transition gracefully into the falling action. You handled your all your chapters with the grace and perfection an experienced author. I had originally intended for this review to be soley based on the finer points of the chapter, but i guess that can happen next chapther eh? If you just would have slipped in the chapters about the Horcruxes and lengthened the chapters a bit i would have gladly accepted this as 100% Cannon (but we dont want to get into trouble right?he he)
Instead of giving you a rating with a fraction that would have had a trillion zeros in the numerator I have chosen once more to quote the Baddest of the Bad He he...sweet...-Eric Cartman
believe me that quote means alot more to me than a rating of infinite over 10 (which you still get)
Wow so this chappie was just a warm up eh? So NOW the pieces are moving in earnest. The Knight moves to block the check while the Bishops slide forward to commence the defensive...Yeah sorry about all the Chess analogies. Unusually today i found myself playing chess (for the first time in two yrs.) against my grandad. I surprised myself by soundly beating him in about 12 moves...though i think he stole one of my knights when i wasnt looking...10/10