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Reviews For His Eyes

Name: Nagini Riddle (Signed) · Date: 07/02/12 20:45 · For: Chapter 1
Wow! I think what would have made this even better was if those last three words were inverted to say, Empty. Hard. Cold. I think it would have wrapped this poem up much better, because it would start with the word cold, and then ends with the same word. Other than that, I think it was great!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. That's actually a really good idea.

Name: eva_writes (Signed) · Date: 02/14/09 14:56 · For: Chapter 1
This was a very nice poem. it wa the title that drew me in... when there are poems or even stories about Lily most of them talk about her eyes, and so I though this was interesting. Nice work.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Name: sam_1034_lily (Signed) · Date: 01/05/09 22:47 · For: Chapter 1
i really liked this poem

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: amzing (Signed) · Date: 01/05/09 17:31 · For: Chapter 1
What a lovely poem.. I like the emphasis of the words old, hard, and empty.. They make very fitting ending and beginning statements... Good job : )

Author's Response: Thanks so much! That was actually my favorite part, as well.

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