I really like this chapter. I like how he is only good in Potions. I really like how he doesn't like his dad. It makes it fun to read because he will be mentiooned a lot in the wizarding world. I really like this story so far and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you keep reading. ~Sayla
Okay... even though this story is alternate universe... it doesn't depict Harry and Ginny well... and why is the character so whiny. But just because your story is alternate universe that doesn't really give you an excuse to make the character stupid if he's in Ravenclaw. If so he really should be in Hufflepuff.
Author's Response: I admit I did take certain liberties with Harry and Ginny in order to tell this story, and I apologize if you are not fond of their characterization. I also do not believe Brenan is stupid. He may not be booksmart, but there are other types of intelligences that he does possess. This may become apparent later in the story. Please keep reading, and hopefully your complaints will be resolved. ~Sayla
well I'm not going to lie this is strange ! and that is why i wanted to read it because not many show Harry's son in this light
i like the way that you've cut out all the fairytale and made it realistic i'll keep looking for updates
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I hope you continue to like the story. ~Sayla
I like this story and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad to hear it. ~Sayla
Right now he just sounds like a whiny brat. A little background would be helpful. He's in Ravenclaw so he can't be stupid. There has to be some reason his parent's ignore him. How much younger is his sister? Was he this whiny and self-pitying all his life? What happened when he was small/young that gave him this attitude. Is Rose the granddaughter of Bellatrix? Did they know each other before Hogwarts? I guess it would be rather difficult to picture Harry and Ginny happy about they're son's choice in friends, but I also can't picture them shunning or pretending he doesn't exist because of the friendship. Not enough all around info to base a judgement on.
Author's Response: This fic is very alternate universe, so some things about Harry and Ginny may be a bit OOC. I wanted to explore this idea, even if it strayed from actual canon, because it interested me. I hope I can answer your questions as the story progresses. Thank you very much for reviewing, and please keep reading. ~Sayla
Author's Response: Thank you. ~Sayla
I like this. It's a really interesting take on everything HP :-)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it. ~Sayla
Good story .please continue.
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I plan to. ~Sayla
This looks really interesting. I had never really thought about what you've brought up here. This was a pretty good first chapter and I'll be looking forward to the second.
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you keep reading. ~Sayla