Umm... You killed Hermione. ðŸ˜ Good story though
oh. my god. "thank you, captain obvious" , really?
great fic though.
wormtail obviously doesn't know what he's just done... death eaters have cubbyholes?!
google just doesnt like voldy, it's never failed ME...
LOVED this! As in harbor-deep-feelings-of regard-and-affection for it! Although none of this could ever be expected to happen (I hope! Imagine dear old Voldy getting so easily into Hogwarts!), it wasn´t as extensibly OOC as one can expect any humor fic with Voldemort as the protagonist to be (except for the part when Volders goes ¨Mommy¨- SERIOUSLY disturbing image). Your sense of humor is just the best! It doesn´t appear that you are driving yourself to get a roll-around-snorting laugh out of your readers, yet that´s what the cleverly inserted ironic frases and simply-stated humor achieve. Btw, great characterization for
Wormtail. Awesome! Keep writing- please, or I will be forced to prescribe some much needed tough love!
OMG I laughed so hard at this!!!! This story was fantastic and you should definitely continue writing fanfiction!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
What a wonderfully ridiculous tale! I enjoyed it thoroughly. :-D
This story is pure awesomeness. I loved it. It made me giggle a lot. :)
The story is not all together what you'd call "brilliant piece of literature", but it isn't meant to be.
"When Wormtail peeked in the next day, he found Lord Voldemort lying on his bed with the shades drawn, moodily throwing darts at a giant picture of the Boy Who Lived."
Haha, what a great story! I do feel a bit sorry for Chudley though. I like to imagine he's out there somwhere, plotting his revenge. It'd be great for Voldemort to be defeated by something pink. I just think it would be nice and ironic. =]
Awesome!!!!! Please make more!!
Stop making fun of me!!! >:(
Nah, just kidding. Really funny story, especially the "bloody quidditch practice". I'd rate this around 9 out of 10, you should right more funny stories, it's your strength.
Author's Response: Thank you! For constructive purposes--why not 10?
"No, Potter," answered Voldemort. "I am Dumbledore."
I love that quote!
Good job so far! I liked the mentions of Wormtail and the strangling.
Aww, poor chudley at the end there. Other than that... slightly sick-minded lolz :D
Very funny, and witty - this story has potential.
Nice so far. I'm wondering what will happen next.
Hysterical!!!! I can just imagine what ol' Voldy's going to do next.