Reviews For Awake
Reviewer: Lalalalatina
Date: 01/05/09 13:03
Chapter: Am I Awake?

Wow... incredibly desciptive and pretty dark.

Paint my skies with bloody feathers
and set my eyes aflame.


Your description is awesome, and the words you used to describe the situation are so... poetic. Which is good, considering this is a poem. haha...

The ending was stupendous, too. Such a clincher!

Okay, I'm done. Great poem. =)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! Yay, you're the first one! Yeah, it is pretty dark, I know. O_O I'm working on another one for Blood Moon (more poetry, except this time centered around Remus (I only have one validated right now, and it sucks) and it's just as dark. That's some of my favorite lines, too. Thanks! Sorry, I'll shut up now too. :)

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