Reviewer: Bookwormy
Date: 03/10/09 9:31
Chapter: Always Start At the Beginning

That was so funny! I loved the sarcasm :D GO PARODIES!

Author's Response: Thank you! Parodies are indeed beautiful creatures.

Reviewer: Goodbye_Earl
Date: 03/09/09 18:05
Chapter: Unexpected Confrontations

Virtual chocolate! That sounds like my heaven. Another awesome chapter - I love the way you tell this. =]

Author's Response: Virtual chocolate of your choice is being sent as we speak. Glad you liked this chapter!

Reviewer: SnoopyMarauderess
Date: 03/02/09 7:45
Chapter: Unexpected Confrontations

The ADFC is funny, but I would quit, like Sabrina.

Author's Response: Of course you would! Yay for feminism!

Reviewer: SnoopyMarauderess
Date: 03/02/09 7:39
Chapter: Always Start At the Beginning

That us so ... I know it! Zany! And funny! And slightly weird at the same time!

Author's Response: Wow... you just described my life! :) Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: ink_daughter
Date: 03/02/09 6:15
Chapter: Unexpected Confrontations

*gets cold water thrown on face* Whaat? You don't own Harry Potter? :O Shocking!
Hehe. Another very cliche chapter- I love it!

Author's Response: Man, how rich would I be if I were JK...? Anyway, glad you liked the chapter!

Reviewer: mzap
Date: 03/01/09 0:22
Chapter: Unexpected Confrontations

Another hilarious chapter. I loved every moment of it, especially with plot points "accidentally" being given away. *gasp* Really well done and I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the extremely unpredictable plot. Have fun guessing what happens next!

Reviewer: Doxy Eggs
Date: 03/01/09 0:07
Chapter: Always Start At the Beginning

Lol, this is hilarious! Is the "Raven Simmon" supposed to be a reference to "Raven Symone"?

Author's Response: You know, I never thought about the Raven thing, to be honest. But now that you bring it up... yes, of course that was an intentional and completely planned revference! :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: SnoopyMarauderess
Date: 02/28/09 16:42
Chapter: Always Start At the Beginning

this is really funny! i love how you changed it a little and made it so cliched and punned!

Author's Response: Thank you! Reviews are like chocolate: The world would be a dark and dreary place without them.

Reviewer: ivasonia aphrodite
Date: 02/15/09 11:22
Chapter: Always Start At the Beginning

pure gold you effing genius, pure gold.

Author's Response: I'm a genius now! Hurray! Thanks, that officially makes me happy.

Reviewer: oceanianow
Date: 02/06/09 13:41
Chapter: Always Start At the Beginning

Oh dear, what a jolly good start to a fic! Haha. I think it's great! I can't wait to see what happens when everyone magically decides to shop at Diagon Alley at the same time!!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! And Diagon Alley exploits are coming soon in chapter 2!

Reviewer: Goodbye_Earl
Date: 01/18/09 6:25
Chapter: Always Start At the Beginning

Not the door-to-door salesman! - that made me laugh so much!

I loved this story - funniest thing I've read in ages...!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you share my rather odd sense of humor.

Reviewer: quillbites323
Date: 01/17/09 13:47
Chapter: Always Start At the Beginning

Hah. Great job here. It was really funny. I can't wait for more cheesy dialogue and cliches! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you! I will certainly try to maintain the same level of insanity in each chapter. Or wait, it might just increase... you be the judge!

Date: 01/16/09 3:25
Chapter: Always Start At the Beginning

I loved the opening of this chappie with all the:or so they thought...
And I loved the ending with: This story has a plot?
But what I loved the most is.... That so many stories really are like that!

Author's Response: Woot! Glad you approve.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/14/09 22:47
Chapter: Always Start At the Beginning

ROTFLMAO is as good a description as I can come up with at the moment. The story is slightly corny and absolutely hysterical. If it continues as you've started it's going to be a great read.

Author's Response: Thanks! I had several people critique this story so it could be as well-written (translation: corny and insane) as possible. I have chapter 2 already written, so I hope you enjoy that as well once it's posted!

Reviewer: ink_daughter
Date: 01/14/09 20:38
Chapter: Always Start At the Beginning

This is hilarious! I love your sense of humor. I can't wait to see how this story plays out- anything that makes fun of cliches is interesting to me. *clicks on review button because it likes to be clicked on*

Author's Response: Hurray! Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: mzap
Date: 01/14/09 17:46
Chapter: Always Start At the Beginning

Amazing fic! It was absolutely hilarious and I was trying very hard to contain my laughter since I was in the middle of a library when I read this. Brilliantly done and I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Reading fan fiction in the library! For shame! (wink!) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Rainey_Dae
Date: 01/14/09 16:32
Chapter: Always Start At the Beginning

Omg I could hardly read this through my tears of laughter... That was brilliant...

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Chapter 2 is coming!

Reviewer: SeverusSempra
Date: 01/14/09 15:58
Chapter: Always Start At the Beginning

You have to keep going with this, because it is so incredibly funny. :) You had me at the "It contains..." paragraph, because it seems standard issue that every Marauder Era story's summary has to start, "It was the tale of four boys. It was the tale of four best friends. It was the tale of a stag, a wolf, a dog and a rat. It was a tale of a boy with something to prove, a boy with a dark secret..." And I love James-Sue and Lily-Sue, and the meta-literary nature of the characters is also hilarious. Now all you need is some love-hate Lily and James, Sirius as Lothario, sheepish Lupin, and insignificant Peter-- and Severus in full Snidely-Whiplash bad-guy mode as the deserving geeky and peevish subject of various frat-boy-style pranks. Anyway, thanks-- this was a great read. :)

Author's Response: Wow, my first review! Thanks for the helpful and detailed suggestions. You're awesome!

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