Reviewer: YerAWizard
Date: 10/04/10 16:55
Chapter: Unexpected Confrontations

I love randomness!!!!! This story makes me laugh and get strange looks from the people around me!!!!!!!! Yay!!!!!!

Reviewer: Slythindor47
Date: 04/13/10 19:16
Chapter: Unexpected Confrontations

"No, Lily! Remember your place in the ADFC!" Classic. I truly hate that cliche.

Reviewer: Slythindor47
Date: 04/13/10 18:46
Chapter: Always Start At the Beginning

Lol. The door-to-door salesman and the always perfect hair were awesome

Reviewer: CoalBlackCat
Date: 01/04/10 14:54
Chapter: Unexpected Confrontations

hehehe you are pure genuis!!! and you story is very very clever,


Reviewer: Dumb Brunette
Date: 08/31/09 16:46
Chapter: Unexpected Confrontations

This story is soooooooo funny!!!! You are an amazing author!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Hermiones_Therapist
Date: 08/29/09 22:28
Chapter: Unexpected Confrontations

Awesome chapter.

I hope you update this soon! :-)

Reviewer: Hermiones_Therapist
Date: 08/29/09 22:22
Chapter: Always Start At the Beginning


I love the stories that make fun of cliches. Especially the ones that are well-written. Guess which category this story falls into? (Hint: it's well written.)


Reviewer: Roonil_Wazlib125
Date: 08/15/09 18:39
Chapter: Unexpected Confrontations

Hello KDTheRavenclaw,

Wow, this is an amazing humor story! It has tons of the cliches that normally irk readers, but you have transformed them into jokes (and very good jokes at that). I would very much enjoy seeing the rest of this story. You are a fantastic humor writer!

Roonil_Wazlib125 aka Annmarie

Reviewer: Windy Silvermist
Date: 06/10/09 22:18
Chapter: Unexpected Confrontations

Hehe. The moment I saw cheesy I was here. I love cheesy, and this was certainly cheesy. So cheesy that it became hilarious. Funny how that works. I also read this chapter aloud to my sister, because I can do that. I really liked but (oh yes always the but) it was funny the first twelve times you said it but after awhile stopping what is going on because of the plot, kinda of got annoying. On the other hand AMAZING. simply HILARIFICIC. I like making up words. *SIGH* right more please, theres a distinct lack, of next chapters. If you don't write "some evil reviews this way comes!" ( you know cheesy joke off of "something wicked this way comes. But I'm, totally serious about evil reviews.) WRITE! WRITE! GO FORTH AND WRIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!

-Windy the insanelisous

Reviewer: Windy Silvermist
Date: 06/10/09 22:00
Chapter: Always Start At the Beginning

Hehe this was HILARIOUS! I couldn't stop snorting (as you don't know when it's really funny I snort not laugh). I think my sister thought I was demented. So than I had to go, and read aloud to her the whole thing. Yay!

-WIndy the ever snortful

Reviewer: slytherinnx3
Date: 05/03/09 16:06
Chapter: Unexpected Confrontations

haha! this story cracks me up! i love it! can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 04/14/09 15:39
Chapter: Always Start At the Beginning

the part in James dream was really funny.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: armagod679
Date: 04/13/09 12:10
Chapter: Unexpected Confrontations

Ah, the wonderful cliched Marauders! Major plot points or no, please update some time in the current lunar cycle... unless Remus is resting...

Author's Response: Remus is fine and dandy, but KD is resting. I got tonsillitis a few weeks ago and I'm still trying to get caught up with college stuff. But chapter 3 is coming!

Date: 03/24/09 11:06
Chapter: Unexpected Confrontations

Yay!!!! Chappie two!
You know, it annoys me when authors turn Peter into the worthless charachter in fics... but here it really was funny!
And i loved the whole Black/White thing.

Author's Response: Peter being worthless is another cliche, so of course I had to include it. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: EmmaWatsonisHott
Date: 03/22/09 21:35
Chapter: Always Start At the Beginning

ahhaha funny stuff
like the door-to-door salesman
and when he was like her name was damnit

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: SnoopyMarauderess
Date: 03/22/09 11:16
Chapter: Unexpected Confrontations

"When are you going to have the next chapter ready?" whined the impatient reviewer. " I've been waiting soooooo long. By the way, you and me could be some strange sort of personality twins. We love Harry Potter fan fics (especially marauder era), we procrastinate, the list is endless! Did I mention we're hilarious?"

Author's Response: "The next chapter will be up as soon as I get some plot bunnies in proper order," replied the ever-procrastinating author. "It hopefully shouldn't be too much longer!"

Reviewer: The Scribbler
Date: 03/21/09 13:43
Chapter: Always Start At the Beginning

Lol! Congrats on your first fic. The intro alone forced me to review. For some reason, it reminded me of the beginning of A Tale of Two Cities. Overall, I love this first chapter. All the sarcasm and random fanfic cliches made it hilarious. Now, I'm off to read the second chapter!

Reviewer: Coola_Doola
Date: 03/16/09 19:27
Chapter: Unexpected Confrontations

oh my goodness! virtual chocolate! sign me up!
hahaha this story is great.
I love cliches and making fun of them, so its perfect!
hahaha Lucius and Bella are my favourites!
Great story, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Finest virtual chocolate coming your way. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: wotcher_slytherin
Date: 03/11/09 6:53
Chapter: Unexpected Confrontations

hehe! this is *amazing* i can't wait for the next post! this one of the best ideas i've ever heard of and if you know me...which you probably don't then you'd know i don't usaully give out compliments. please write much more and soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! My spring break is coming up, so it shouldn't be much longer.

Reviewer: Bookwormy
Date: 03/10/09 9:45
Chapter: Unexpected Confrontations

Good one :D Update soon!!! and gimme choclate!

Author's Response: Gourmet virtual chocolate comin' atcha!

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