Reviews For Burrowing Back
Reviewer: eternalangel
Date: 06/22/09 23:09
Chapter: Depression

This was a wonderful piece of work that really captured Percy as we have never seen him. The language was beautiful and I think you really nailed down the emotional turmoil Percy went through. I especially loved the use of the picture and how each family member reacted differently to Percy. I loved the comparison between that lonely little tree and Percy.

One of my favorite line is this "Pain and loss emanated from within me in synchronicity to the bittersweet memories – every one like a knife’s thrust to my heart."

I think you did a wonderful job with this story. I did find one tiny mistake and it is here:
"Whatever I it was I had hoped to find, however, did not exist in reality." I think you meant to write "Whatever it was I had hoped..." without the "I".

Other than that, fantastic job!

Reviewer: Jazzbones
Date: 01/09/09 10:53
Chapter: Pride

This is a very wonderful and touching story. Never had much thought of how it might be viewed from Percy's side. Very well written indeed.

Author's Response: Thanks very much. I'm so glad you enjoyed the fic, and thank you for leaving such lovely comments!

Reviewer: Sly One
Date: 01/07/09 20:23
Chapter: Pride

AWwww this is a scene that should have been in JK's books. Great imagery and detail btw...wow you are good! I don't say that lightly!

thanks for bringing my favorite Weasley to life!

SLy

Author's Response: Aw, thanks for such a compliment! I'm really glad you enjoyed this story, and thanks so much for reciewing - you're my one faithful reviewer, lol!

Reviewer: Sly One
Date: 01/01/09 1:24
Chapter: Fury

Loving it! Good job...great attention to detail...banishing his clothes? YIKES! I am wondering why you didn't just make Maria...Audrey and kill the cannon bird with one stone...it would give the story a bit more drama because you know they wind up together so you'll wonder how they got from estranged to betroved but thats just an observation...great stuff so far!

SLy



Author's Response: Lol, glad you're enjoying it. Audrey was actually my initial plan, but the challenge prompt said the character I introduced had to be an original one... which rather killed the idea of Audrey! Last chapter coming soon x

Reviewer: Sly One
Date: 12/28/08 16:21
Chapter: Depression

A Percy fic! WOW finally! Very well written too, I might add! You gave him depth, remorse, pride, haughtiness...and made it all breathtakingly sympathetic. BRAVO! Please continue!

SLy



Author's Response: Thanks very much, I'm really glad you liked the characterisation and I'm definitely continuing, don't worry!

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