Reviewer: BabyDoll101
Date: 08/19/11 15:00
Chapter: Chapter 4: "Too Close"

Where's Chapter 5?! This is great!!!!

Reviewer: Mallarie Greene
Date: 01/05/11 15:24
Chapter: Chapter 4: "Too Close"

This is a wonderful story! I love how you really get to know Draco and Astoria especially because they never mention Astoria in the books. I think how she reacts towards him is very funny and you get to see how Draco is without all the pressures of his life, just him and Astoria. All in all, I love your story and I hope you write more!

Reviewer: littlewolf
Date: 11/23/10 10:26
Chapter: Chapter 1: "The Two Actors"

I really like this story. Please continue writing! =D

Reviewer: iamtrelawney
Date: 09/11/10 15:36
Chapter: Chapter 1: "The Two Actors"

i cant wait till the next part comes out!

Reviewer: karamarie
Date: 03/07/10 21:00
Chapter: Chapter 4: "Too Close"

i seriously will wait until may for your story to continue. i just hope you will keep writing. it's fabulous in just the first four chapters. really good storyline. can't wait ;-) xoxo

Reviewer: noona1
Date: 02/26/10 19:41
Chapter: Chapter 4: "Too Close"

Please do update i was Laughing really hard during this chapter and can't wait for the next ..
Dracky-poo LOL

Reviewer: annabok
Date: 10/24/09 12:39
Chapter: Chapter 4: "Too Close"

hey... wright more! i love your stories! please, for me?

Author's Response: I really really want to...but I've got very important exams in a few months, and I can't write until May 2010...sorry dear...I haven't given up on this story, but I just can't write at the moment... :( Thank you so much for your review...really gives me a lot of encouragement.

Author's Response: I really really want to...but I've got very important exams in a few months, and I can't write until May 2010...sorry dear...I haven't given up on this story, but I just can't write at the moment... :( Thank you so much for your review...really gives me a lot of encouragement.

Reviewer: the_quiveringquill
Date: 09/12/09 9:50
Chapter: Chapter 4: "Too Close"

i love you story, please udate faster!!! I really look forward to hearing what happens after this!!

Author's Response: Thaaaank you! I'll try to update faster. RL issues and beta-ing takes up time... >_<

Reviewer: majestic_ginny
Date: 07/08/09 5:42
Chapter: Chapter 3: "Pushing their Buttons"

Ooh, very lubbly chapter, Rish! I loved Draco's characterization and all. Astoria seems like a good character too... The only problem is that there was too much dialogue and the Trio wasn't shown much. I also kinda feel that Hermione would do a bit more during the dance. Like say something, atleast.... but your language and everything else was PUR-FECT! Keep updatin'! --Your best fwend, Nadia

Author's Response: Yeah, I noticed the over-use of dialogue too! But I didn't really know how to fix it, cuz this chapter's characterisation was mostly through dialogue. :S

Reviewer: JeeviS
Date: 05/06/09 7:42
Chapter: Chapter 1: "The Two Actors"

haha :D... i really cant wait for the next chapter... its a realy good story... i think its a very good thing ur filling the gaps on Draco and Astoria... this is the first story i read on them:D....

Author's Response: Aww, thanks. I also hope I can update faster. It's reviews like yours that keep me going! :)

Reviewer: JeeviS
Date: 05/06/09 3:51
Chapter: Chapter 2: "First Impressions"

I love it:D.... plz continue.........

Author's Response: Glad you love it! Of course I'll continue. :)

Reviewer: sam_1034_lily
Date: 05/05/09 17:08
Chapter: Chapter 2: "First Impressions"

great update soon

Author's Response: Yep, sure will. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: delirioustk
Date: 05/04/09 20:48
Chapter: Chapter 2: "First Impressions"

=) I liked it! Yeah, the wait was really long...but I had it under 'fav stories' so I got an email update! =)))) Daphne's really...something. and astoria sounds wonderful!

i was wondering though, why are all of the witches half in love with Draco Malfoy? Don' get me wrong, he seems like a great catch (for pureblood supremacists like them) but he can't be the only cute pureblood wizard in their age range...:pp

Author's Response: Yeah, sorry for the wait. Too many RL issues and plus the queue wasn't lucky for me. >_< Anywho, I did give Blaise as the other cute pureblood bachelor out there, and the witches "were" in love in Draco, but fell a bit out of it after the war, what with him being a Death Eater and all. Yet, no one can deny his charm, right? lol. Daphne? LOL! More of that coming up! And Astoria's dialogues are my fav to write! ^_^ Thank you so much for adding this to your favs and reviewing! I was afraid my readers had forgotten my story. >_<

Reviewer: delirioustk
Date: 02/28/09 12:07
Chapter: Chapter 1: "The Two Actors"

me likey likey!~ i think Draco was well written - in character, i mean. I can't wait for more chapters!

Author's Response: LOL! The second chapter's in the queue! Thanks for reading and reviewing! You have no idea how much that helps! XD

Reviewer: Mila Zakharov
Date: 02/09/09 21:44
Chapter: Chapter 1: "The Two Actors"

Hahahah...witches robes, that was brilliant!

I really liked this. Even though I don't usually read Draco/anyone fics I thought this first chapter was very good it impressed me how well written it was: descriptive but not overly so, and very quick and easy to follow...very JK Rowling-style!.

I don't know much about Astoria and I already sympathise with her. Even from the little infor we get here we can see she's a well-rounded character. And congrats on keeping Draco in character, it always was a hard thing to do for me, and I think you characterised him wonderfully.

I'll definitely keep reading, in fact, i can't wait for chapter two!
*huggles*
Mila.

PS: Alyssa is my beta too! The MNFF world is small!

Author's Response: Wow! That means so much! I can't believe you compared my style to JKR's! *huggles back* I can't wait to update chapter 2 either! It's currently with Alyssa, and it'll be up soon. She's your beta too? Cool. :D Astoria will be treated like an OC here as no one really knows much about her anyway. So I have lots of opportunities to make her character shine. I love Draco when he's in character! ;P Thanks for your amazing review! ~Rish~

Reviewer: sam_1034_lily
Date: 01/01/09 19:31
Chapter: Chapter 1: "The Two Actors"

wow! sounds really good hope you update soon

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm sorta having a bad case of writer's block, but I'm trying to get over it. I really appreciate you reviewing, it's my first fanfiction, and I'm very insecure about my work. Thanks again!

Reviewer: SinsRemedy
Date: 01/01/09 12:04
Chapter: Chapter 1: "The Two Actors"

Wow this is a grate story! I realy hope you update it soon.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm sorta having a bad case of writer's block, but I'm trying to get over it. I'm really happy that you like it, it's my first fanfiction, and I'm very insecure about my work. Thanks again!

Reviewer: majestic_ginny
Date: 12/30/08 21:05
Chapter: Chapter 1: "The Two Actors"

Hey, good one, Rish! Hope the next ones come soon!--Nadia

Author's Response: Gee, thanks, Nadz! You're the first one to review! Love you!

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