Reviewer: welshdevondragon
Date: 06/12/09 10:26
Chapter: And So the Lights Flicker

I love the way you use flashbacks, and the relationship between ROdolphus and Evan Rosier- looking forward to the rest of the story!

Reviewer: freewolf
Date: 01/10/09 11:37
Chapter: And So the Lights Flicker

Interesting... I like it!

Reviewer: SexY_LydZ
Date: 12/30/08 3:32
Chapter: And So the Lights Flicker

Hi Alison!

First, let me say thank you for your lovely review. I just replied to it, and I mentioned how I loved this fic when I read it, so I wanted I to review.

I love your characterisation of Bella. She was just so believable that I reckon I smile every time she had a line of dialogue.

I also loved how human your Evan and your Rodolphus were. They had flaws and weaknesses and real, substantial personalities, like the fact that Rodolphus loved books and the fascination with the meaning of Rosier’s name. I think this is why I liked this chapter so much; they weren’t just evil Death Eaters with no minds of their own, they were heartbreakingly human.

I’m really looking forward to the next chapter of this story.
- Lyd

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I've written Rodolphus tons of times, but this was my first time for Evan, and I was really pleased with the way he turned out. The next chapter the rest of the story, actually is with my beta, and I'll put it up ASAP. I hope you'll like it all the way through!

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