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Reviews For Living in Twilight

Name: Theloonyhermione (Signed) · Date: 07/10/12 22:33 · For: Living in Twilight
This was really good! Even though this wasn't really romantic, I loved the Luna/Neville!! I'm sad they didn't marry, they would have been fantastic together in my opinion. Great job!

Name: The_Real_Hermione (Signed) · Date: 01/03/11 18:20 · For: Living in Twilight
Your characterisation of Luna was amazing... just enough of her weirdness but still that sweet side of her which really helps Neville feel better. Neville was very good too, and I liked how you showed the beginning of how he changed in DH. I really loved how you wrote this too - especially how it was mostly dialogue-driven, and you wrote the dialogue really well. Great story!!

Name: Srimgeor (Signed) · Date: 01/05/09 23:12 · For: Living in Twilight
Good story! I loved the insight into Neville's character, I tend to forget about him, poor guy! Anyway, great job, and please, keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Name: Ravencorgi (Signed) · Date: 12/29/08 19:58 · For: Living in Twilight
First of all, I really like the concept of this fic--everything the characters think and feel seems very natural and real. Your characterization of Luna is the best I've read in a long time. A lot of people tend to make her too...well, normal, but you've captured her spaciness while keeping her point of view believable. You've portrayed Neville well, too; I can definitely see how he could change into who he is in DH.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! :)

Name: ritaskeetertobe (Signed) · Date: 12/29/08 18:16 · For: Living in Twilight
Aw... Thanks so much Melissa! I absolutely loved it!
You portrayed both Luna and Neville perfectly!

Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad you liked it! :D

Name: JustLikeHermione77 (Signed) · Date: 12/29/08 12:39 · For: Living in Twilight
aww!! i never actually thought about neville's point of view about the department of mysteries..great story! you captured luna perfectly. :-)

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

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