Reviewer: Lalalalatina
Date: 01/05/09 13:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

Timing.
If only we had better timing.
But would it all have been worth it if our timing had been different?


Haha.. my thoughts exactly when I was reading the novel. Anyway, on to my review...


I thought you captured Hermione's emotions and personality wonderfully.

“Why are you alone?”
This time, I answer;
“I wasn’t aware that I was supposed to be with anyone.”


That is such a Hermione-ish thing to say. Ron's lines also suit his character very well. I love that this poem focuses on a situation in DH that we couldn't focus on because we were so caught up with Harry's adventure. And I like that you didn't force yourself into a structure or rhyme scheme. It makes this seem more like a diary entry.

Great poem, keep writing. =)

Author's Response: thanks! I love that you quoted the "Timing" thing, that was probably my favorite part as well... =] Also, I'm very glad you liked their characters, because that's something I struggle with, so it means a lot to me that you liked it. Thank you very much!

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 12/23/08 12:51
Chapter: Chapter 1

*sniff* great job! :-)

Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much!

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