hey! This is one of my definite favorite stories. Every time I read it i find myself choking back tears. It is excellent. Two people I want Fred to vist- Ginny and Molly- when is that happening? I didn;t even think he would visit Hermione, and I wasn't thinking Harry either although now that you've included her, I guess he's going to be getting a visit somethime soon too eh? Not that I am complaining. I thought it was sweet. Keep writing more!
That was a real surprise ! We always think of Hermione as being so strong snd logical. So she would be the one who bottles up all the pain, while others let go. It was lovely that Fred would visit her. Just think of what impact this visit can make through her. Outstanding!!! I'll be waiting for the next update, this is soooo outstanding. ;-)
OMG you had tears in my eyes reading EVERY chapter! I can't wait to see who Fred visits next.
Well that was a surprise. But then Fred was surprised that Bill needed to see him. I don't think I even guess who'll be next (as I have in previous reviews). There is hope that there will be a visit to Molly ( Fred did mention it). I am enjoying your one shots. Really well written and great storylines
I really enjoyed this. It was really good seeing the interaction. It would be just how I imagined it.
I was really sure Molly would have been next, to see Fred. I guess we don't realize, how Charlie feels, being as separate from the family as he is. I like how you've really tailored how Fred visits each of his family members. to the particular person. Well done, can't wait till the next. Awesome read.
I really liked this chapter. But I still think there is a girl for Charlie
OMG! I felt like crying, but tears just wouldn't come out of my eyes. Amazing.
My fave part in the chapter is when Fred told Arthur: 'I can touch the sky dad!'
I miss Fred, the word 'twins' just isn't complete w/o him gone! :'(
OMG its such a nice story. i love the prank on the LUPINS' and the POTTERS'
All Right!!! Perhaps now George will find the prankster within. Sounds like Fred never lost his. Now I'm guessing it's Mollys turn.This is really a good fiction.
I like the idea Fred doing a prank on James and Remus. I couldn't stop laughing . Write more please. This is really good. Hmmm, so I'm having a guess the next person Fred visits is Ron. If not, then I would say Harry.
Interesting. Glad that you kept Fred in character.
Oh, Terri, you know I love this story and even though I've read this chapter before, I still got a shiver down my spine at this point.
“Are you ever going to stop blaming yourself?” came a voice from the shadows.
Percy is so often seen as just a pompous prat that it's nice to see him written with a bit of depth. I love that even though he's feeling guilty and sad, he still manages to get annoyed with Fred at the end.
Lovely story. Carole xxx
That was really good. It's excellent that Fred tried to convince Percy that their meeting was just a dream. I really like your storyline.
Not as poignant as the visit with Arthur, but it shouldn't be because the message is different.
I love the way this is written. I lost my spouse a little over 14 yrs ago and know he is watching over me. I wish it were possible for him to make a visit like Fred's. Maybe if he had been a wizard.
That was so sweet ... I loved it. So beautiful. Only ... if he could only choose one person, how come you're writing more visits? Oh well, I suppose we'll find out. Amazing story; I miss Fred so much!
T_T you made me cry. lovely fic...am looking forward to his visit with george.
Oh, this was beautiful! I absolutely loved it. I can't wait for more visits from Fred!
That was so beautiful. I hope it helps Arthur. I also hope you have the next chapter on the way for the queue. It's a special way for the Weasleys to say goodbye. I think next visit should be with George or Molly, I'm siding with George. Perhaps Arthur's time with Fred's spirit will help him sort things out with Molly. Please don't make us wait too long.