Reviews For Secret Mischief
Reviewer: Windy Silvermist
Date: 05/22/09 16:02
Chapter: Letters

NIce cliffiesh thing, I like it. Luna, and George.....Coolio. Not a commen idea, it's new and interesting. I can't wait till Ginny actually starts the get together with them. I can't wait for the next chapeter. Hurry up please!

-WIndy the ever impatient.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 04/09/09 20:16
Chapter: Letters

Excellent chapter, but a bit slow moving for me. I keep wanting more though so I guess that is a good thing! :-)

Reviewer: lily_luna
Date: 03/20/09 20:38
Chapter: Prologue: Remembrance

wow i absolutly love this story!
i just happened to come across it and once i started reading i couldnt stop :).
Is there going to be a second part to this story?

Reviewer: Phoenix13
Date: 03/20/09 19:05
Chapter: Prologue: Remembrance

I LOVELOVELOVE this story so far. At first, I saw the summarry and it said George/Luna, which I was very hesitant to read because I hate straying from canon. But I was bored, so I startesd reading it and couldn't stop. I lOVE your portrayal of Luna!!!!! She's always been one of my favourites....okay, my VERY much that I did a mahvelous painting of her in oils....hehe....anyway, I thought you captured her just right. Her point of view is dead-on. She thinks almost like a child....and I adore that. Keep writing; I cannot wait to see the next chapter!!!

Date: 02/19/09 9:24
Chapter: Plums and Plans

ooh... A plan! I hope they help George.
And I loved this: "She had come out to take a moment to admire the beautiful sky, coloured in various shades of grey and blue" That sounds so much like Luna!

Author's Response: I hope you keep reading. There are very few people who read George/Luna. I've been trying my best to get Luna's characterization right.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 02/15/09 12:48
Chapter: Plums and Plans

I liked this chapter!! Cannot wait to see how they are going to start up the shop in Hogmeade... Please update soon!!!

Author's Response: I've just submitted chapter 4 to the queue. I'm really glad that you've liked it so far.

Date: 01/24/09 10:45
Chapter: Dancing With The Gnomes

A very orriginal pairing! I'm a huge Luna/Neville fan but I'll make an acception.
I love the idea of Luna dancing with gnomes and George watching her!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I quite like Luna/Neville myself but I love George/Luna. :)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 01/18/09 21:07
Chapter: Dancing With The Gnomes

Love it!!! Luna certainly has an interesting effect on lots of people ;-)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 01/18/09 20:58
Chapter: Prologue: Remembrance

I think this will be a really interesting story to see develop. I have to admit that this ship hadnt crossed my mind. Looking forward to see how it plays out!

Reviewer: ink_daughter
Date: 01/18/09 20:52
Chapter: Dancing With The Gnomes

This was cute! I love luna.

Author's Response: Thank you. I love Luna too!

Reviewer: way 2 HP obsesed
Date: 12/26/08 13:08
Chapter: Prologue: Remembrance

this is a pretty good start, i am interested in where you take it. i remember the first fanfic i ever read was a george/luna, and i never really got why people thought they should be a couple. i always thought that george would end up with someone different...but not angelina, like most other people think. anyway, good job and keep writting.

Author's Response: Thank you. I was convinced about this pairing after reading a few wonderful fics by ozma_katiebell on livejournal. I really like the idea of these two together. :)

Reviewer: Doxy Eggs
Date: 12/26/08 9:18
Chapter: Prologue: Remembrance

I like it a lot, can't wait for the next chapter. But I have a question about this line:
she had lost her mother at the age of seven.
Didn't it say in Book 5 that Luna was 9 when her mother died?

Anyways, love Luna, love the story!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for pointing that out. When I was writing I thought she was seven at first but I looked up at the lexicon and found she was nine. I thought that I'd corrected it then but I guess I missed it. I'm glad you pointed it out. It's corrected now.:)

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 12/25/08 23:10
Chapter: Prologue: Remembrance

Very good beginning. I've liked Luna since she was introduced. I wouldn't mind being a litlle, or maybe a lot, like her.

Author's Response: Thank you! I love Luna and I'd be thrilled to be like her! She's one of my most favourite characters.

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