Reviewer: HazeyHero
Date: 12/07/10 4:21
Chapter: Chapter 1: Trains and Friends

thanks so much and np also I don't have a forums account so yeah I'm not on there

Author's Response: Oh... do you have facebook then? What's your name?

Reviewer: sparklingstag
Date: 12/06/10 15:43
Chapter: Chapter 9: Following In My Footsteps

Hey this is really good, i admit the first couple of chapters i skimmed over a bit, but this is tense! I love how its exactly the same as Harry's first year arriving and 4th year with the Tournament, you must have done some research. Also well done with the sorting hat song a few chapters back :) Please write more soon :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! And to tell the truth, I often skim over the first few chapters too sometimes ^_^. Yep, I guess I did do a bit of research, considering that I have the HP Lexicon open in another window while I write ;). lol. Thanks a lot for your compliment! Hope you come back for the next chapters! --Nadia

Reviewer: HazeyHero
Date: 12/06/10 2:53
Chapter: Chapter 1: Trains and Friends

hi I really hope Scorpius and Albus will always be best friends forever just like Harry and Ron and maybe Scorpius will marry Rose in the future. I love your story so much and glad they are best friends. Scorpius reminds me of Sirius Black cause they are both full of life and they both hate death eaters and muggle haters. Muggles are normal to them and keep me updated for the next chapter if you can. Btw I also want to write an Albus Potter series so I was wondering if you have any ideas for me to start on can you give me any ideas? And thanks.

Author's Response: Hey, thanks a lot! And yep, I think Scorpius and Albus WILL be best friends forever, at least, that's my plan. They MIGHT have a few squabbles now and then... ;). Let's see. Scorpius reminds me of Sirius too, you know? I think I made Harry say that too :). And of course I'd love to give you some ideas on your fic!:D I love reading next gen fics! Are you on the forums too? What's your screenname there? I'll send you a PM :). And if you favourite the story, you'll get e-mails when I update. Thanks a lot for your review! --Nadia

Reviewer: ShadowNeo
Date: 12/04/10 16:23
Chapter: Chapter 9: Following In My Footsteps

I love how the way you incorporate things like they would actually turn out, like personalities.
It gives the story the feeling that it could easily have been written by JKR.
You are great, please update quickly!!!

Author's Response: Aww, that was such a nice compliment! Thanks so much!! ^_^. And I'll try to update ASAP!

Reviewer: paudie
Date: 12/01/10 14:26
Chapter: Chapter 9: Following In My Footsteps

Ah how could this happen, poor Albus! I'm rreally enjoying reading this. Paudie

Author's Response: lol, Albus has to endure a lot more :P. Thanks for the review!! --Nadia

Reviewer: paudie
Date: 12/01/10 11:23
Chapter: Chapter 4: Howlers and Classes

Love it! Great to see what Albus is getting up to and just would not have imagined Scorpius turning out like that Looking forward to seeing what happens next,
Paudie

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it :). Albus and Scorpius will be up to a lot more in future! --Nadia

Reviewer: Rogonja
Date: 11/27/10 15:17
Chapter: Chapter 9: Following In My Footsteps

I want more!!! Hurry up with next chapter!

Author's Response: lol, more coming soon! :)

Reviewer: Rogonja
Date: 11/27/10 14:32
Chapter: Chapter 5: Sacks and Glass Jars

good writing!

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: Rogonja
Date: 11/27/10 14:01
Chapter: Chapter 3: Surprises and More Surprises

bloody brilliant!

Author's Response: :) thank you!

Reviewer: Rogonja
Date: 11/27/10 13:35
Chapter: Chapter 1: Trains and Friends

this is excellent!!

Author's Response: thanks a lot! :)

Reviewer: RavenclawAspirant
Date: 11/24/10 18:21
Chapter: Chapter 9: Following In My Footsteps

I really like this story. I think that it is a very good idea and i like how closely you follow what happens in the books without changing things. The one thing i would like to comment on though is that i don't think that Ginny would be content staying at home and not working. She seems like such an independant person that it doesn't seem like her to be a house wife. Also she makes a point in the books (end of seventh) of hating to be left behind so i feel like she would have put up more of a fight. Also i thought you did a good job of staying true to harry with him thinking it must be his fault but i think the others (especially Ron) would have yelled at him more telling him he was being ridiculous. Please write more soon! I want to know who put his name in the goblet!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you liked the story. And Ginny doesn't stay at home, JKR said that once she retired from playing Quidditch, she worked as a reporter for the sports page for the Daily Prophet :). But you're right, I should have made Ron yell at him a bit more :P. I'll keep that in mind the next time Harry blames himself ;) lol. Thanks a lot for the comments, I really appreciate it! More coming soon! --Nadia

Reviewer: aarati
Date: 11/24/10 9:56
Chapter: Chapter 9: Following In My Footsteps

I just loved it its so Awesome... & poor Albus he is just in his 1st yr atleast Harry was in his 4th year when he got chosen.... hope all ends well & i guess its Potion Professer & Lucius put Al name ....
I'm so eager to read more so plsssssss update soooooonnnnnnnn..... :-)

Author's Response: aww, I'm so glad you liked it! It's sad about Al, isn't it? Just wait till the tasks... ;)I'll update soon, don't worry! --Nadia

Reviewer: LunaLover203
Date: 11/23/10 11:32
Chapter: Chapter 9: Following In My Footsteps

It's really really good, who could it be?

Author's Response: thank you! :) We'll have to wait and see who it is, won't we? ;) I wouldn't wanna ruin the surprise! :P --Nadia

Reviewer: iLuna17
Date: 11/05/10 7:25
Chapter: Chapter 1: Trains and Friends

Okay. I'm trying it. Thanks!

Author's Response: ^_^ You're welcome! And don't forget to tell me when you're fic's validated, ok? :)

Reviewer: adithyabigal
Date: 11/04/10 18:40
Chapter: Chapter 1: Trains and Friends

Oh my gosh! Albus is the School Champion! I never saw that one coming! :)

Anyway, great story, please keep writing!
I can't wait to see what the first task will be, hopefully it also involves a dragon.

Author's Response: Haha :). I'm glad you liked it! And the first task..... ;) Well, it doesn't involve a dragon, but it IS something cool :P --Nadia

Reviewer: iLuna17
Date: 11/04/10 17:19
Chapter: Chapter 1: Trains and Friends

I'm giving up on my story. I tried to get it validated 5 times, no luck. My friends and I made it into a play, so, it's all good.

Author's Response: Aww, come on, don't give up hope! :) I really wanna read your story! Do you have a beta? You can go to the Beta forums (look at the menu bar on the left) and hire a beta. They'll look over your stories and help you fix them. I'm sure it'll be validated :)

Reviewer: iLuna17
Date: 10/30/10 8:45
Chapter: Chapter 8: Impacts and Consequences

Who could be the villian this time? The story I'm trying to get validated is sort of like this. . . in a sense. All seem well, then suddenly trouble comes back again! I still love it!

Author's Response: Haha, the villain's a secret! ;) You'll get to know in due time :) And good luck with your story! I'm looking forward to reading it. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked the story! :D --Nadia

Reviewer: iLuna17
Date: 10/30/10 8:36
Chapter: Chapter 6: Trains, Stars and Goblets

I love how you added the Salem witches. We learned about the witch trials a while ago in History, and I think that it is cool how you brought that in. I forgot to mention this earlier, but I really don't like what you did with Neville. He doesn't seem like the time to harden. Other than that. . . keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review :). I'm glad you liked it! And I'll remember what you said about Neville, I'll try to make him more Neville-ish in future :P. Thanks for the feedback! I really appreciate it:) --Nadia

Reviewer: LunaLover203
Date: 10/29/10 7:33
Chapter: Chapter 8: Impacts and Consequences

Thanks for writting more FINALLY it's really good PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON

Author's Response: You're welcome :). It's just that I've got a lot of work nowadays, Grade 11 can be really hard. I'll try to update ASAP. I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the review! --Nadia

Reviewer: RavenclawAspirant
Date: 10/27/10 18:23
Chapter: Chapter 8: Impacts and Consequences

I liked it a lot! The one thing i would say is that it does seem a bit impractical that Albus would be able to compete as only a first year. Also it got confusing with all the teacher's names all talking trying to figure out who was who. I am however really enjoying the idea of a US school competing (I am an American and i always wished JK Rowling would add American characters to the wizarding world)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you liked it!:) And yeah, I know its kinda odd for Al to compete like this... though it kinda makes things more interesting :P. As for the teachers' names-- I'll give a list of who teacher what in the next chapter, ok? :) And by the way, I'm Bangladeshi ;). That's why I gave Bangladesh as one of the other countries competing. I wanted the last one to have a culture I knew about and was in a different continent as well, so the first thing that came into my head was the US :P. Anyway, thanks a lot for the review, and I hope you'll come back for the next chapter! --Nadia

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