Wow, I really thought this piece was both moving and beautiful. The way you made the reader's heart ache was intricate and wonderful and heartrending at the same time. Well done.
Author's Response: Thanks, I am glad you liked the emotion, it was something I tried extremely hard to portray. Thanks for the R&R!
It's one of the saddest stories i've read and it was not what i was expecting at all. Great story, but who is the father and the daughter?
Author's Response: I am glad you liked it and it was Hermione and her father :) Thanks for the R&R