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Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 09/24/14 12:49 · For: You dance divinely, Mr Weasley.
That was very funny. I loved the part when George was wearing Niffler underpants. That only goes to show that you should wear clean underwear when you go out just as your mother told you. I should've figured those were Krum's robes.

Name: J-Holly (Signed) · Date: 04/04/13 9:38 · For: You dance divinely, Mr Weasley.
Thank you for giving me the dress you wore when you first kissed Granddad.
Wow. Amazing touch. I really like George(or Fred)/Angelina, and this is the best one I've ever read.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review - I really appreciate it and am glad you liked the story. I think they're rather an underated couple, so I like reading and writing them, too. ~Carole~

Name: Ginnypotter2699 (Signed) · Date: 02/22/12 4:49 · For: You dance divinely, Mr Weasley.
Please, please, please write another G/A fic! I promise that if you do I'll review it! Anyway, I loved this.

Author's Response: I will add it to my long list of stories to write/complete. Thank youuuuu. ~Carole~

Name: Dad (Signed) · Date: 02/16/12 14:56 · For: You dance divinely, Mr Weasley.
I really enjoyed that. I am going to have to read a lot more of your stuff.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I do write a lot of diverse things with different pairings and eras so I hope you find something else that you like. ~Carole~

Name: Ginnypotter2699 (Signed) · Date: 12/22/11 6:06 · For: You dance divinely, Mr Weasley.
I love it!

Author's Response: Thank you ~Carole~

Name: Ginnypotter2699 (Signed) · Date: 12/21/11 5:55 · For: You dance divinely, Mr Weasley.
I love George and Angelina stories. So, I like this one to

Author's Response: Yes, I like George and Angelina as a couple. I'm planning another one, which isn't compliant with this. Hopefully that will be written in the New year. thank you. ~Carole~

Name: OtterMoone (Signed) · Date: 07/22/11 18:47 · For: You dance divinely, Mr Weasley.
I just KNEW that dress was going to end up having been important in the getting-together of her grandparents!!! Anyway, it was very good, and the sudden twist with Krum was funny :)

Author's Response: Ha ha ha - the dress is based on a dress I have. I wanted George and Angelina to have a lovely first kiss and start being happy together. Krum made me giggle too. ~Carole~

Name: Kaiserin (Signed) · Date: 08/30/10 11:24 · For: You dance divinely, Mr Weasley.
That last sentence got me slightly emotional...

I very much enjoyed this one-shot. It was nice and endearing.

I'm guessing you're not very fond of Ron/Hermione, by the way the girl was constantly irritatedby him. Honestly, doxy eggs? What a pine-head!

LOL! I enjoyed it! ;)

Author's Response: No no nooooo, I love Ron/Hermione, I needed an excuse for George to go to the ball. I just think Ron is still a bit of a prat at times - ha ha. Glad you liked the story. ~Carole~

Name: argothor (Signed) · Date: 08/12/10 20:11 · For: You dance divinely, Mr Weasley.
Nicely done. You did a good job capturing the feel of JK Rowlings' characters and supplying a plausible story of George that fills in some of the holes from the Battle of Hogwarts to Ms. Rowling's statement that George and Angelina marry.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review. Glad you enjoyed the story ~Carole~

Name: WeasleyMom (Signed) · Date: 04/03/10 8:09 · For: You dance divinely, Mr Weasley.
Carole, I'm so glad I stumbled upon this this morning. I've been on a huge George (and subsequently, George/Ang) kick lately, and this really hit the spot. I loved the progression of his grief, how he used to hate hearing Fred's name and now needs to talk... and how the room is still so difficult to go into.

I also really enjoyed the other family relationships... how George and Hermione got on, and his conversation with Harry as well.

I liked it a lot! Thanks!

Author's Response: Thank you. I like George and Angelina and get annoyed when people say they shouldn't have got married, so I'm pleased to find another fan. OOH, this was written ages ago. I think it may have been my first oneshot. Wow, I feel as if I've been here forever. Thanks agaain and I'm glad you enjoyed the story. ~Carole~

Name: Accio_Chocolate (Signed) · Date: 02/13/10 22:44 · For: You dance divinely, Mr Weasley.
Love the part about Angelina borrowing the dress from her Grandma! I "borrowed" all my Grandma's shoes from the 70s and 80s because she can't wear heels anymore.

Author's Response: Thank you. I just liked the idea of her having a special dress. ~Carole~

Name: Fiffer Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 11/15/09 21:53 · For: You dance divinely, Mr Weasley.
Such a lovley story. It was absolutly wonderful. I love the story behind Angelina's dress, and George's underpants. The way George is reacting to Fred's death is also very nicley done. TI's not too dramatic bu it also isn't pushed aside. Teh detal with the robes beign Krum's jsut takes teh Icing.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. It's always nice to find someone reading my older stories. ~Carole~

Name: ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor (Signed) · Date: 10/09/09 21:01 · For: You dance divinely, Mr Weasley.
Awwww! This story is just so relentlessly cute! I love it, and it's nice to see a feel-good story for George after losing his twin.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Yeah, George deserves a bit of happiness, doesn't he? ~Carole~

Name: the opaleye (Signed) · Date: 08/05/09 1:28 · For: You dance divinely, Mr Weasley.
I loved this! I originally started reading because I thought it was one of those rare Hermione/George fics (I'm writing one myself so I got quite excited) but it was a pleasant surprise when Angelina came along :) I liked your mixture of sadness and humour and your characterisation was good. I can imagine Ron doing an idiotic thing like eat a pound of Doxy eggs...
So, well done. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
And on a completely different topic, I love Audiofictions! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Hmmm, George/Hermione - that does sound interesting. I think the reason I stuck with Angelina, is because so many people are against them as a canon couple, and I think they work. I'm glad you liked Ron being an idiot - I don't think that boy ever really grows up (heh heh). Thank you also listening to Audiofics. ~Carole~

Name: luinrina (Signed) · Date: 05/10/09 4:56 · For: You dance divinely, Mr Weasley.
Aww, what a sweet ending. Also, what began as a George/Hermione date, ended as George/Angelina. Nicely done, Carole. I enjoyed it very much.

The description of the scenes was splendid. The entire time, I envisioned the ballroom to look like a crystal cave.

I found the characterisations to be done great. The groaning of Hermione over Ron gave an added touch to the two’s quarrels in their relationship, giving it more depths. But nonetheless, it shone through that Hermione still loved Ron. What I thought to be a bit over the top was Viktor Krum. I can imagine he’d be surprised and angry to see someone else wear the robes he ordered, but in my eyes, his reaction was a bit too strong. I would have rather liked to see Krum being a bit calmer about the entire situation.

What I also noticed were some punctuation mistakes. For example, in the sentence Okay, I’m calm now, lead the way, Oh heir of Slytherin , the second comma should be a full stop, thus dividing the sentence into two, or a semi-colon. Also, shouldn’t the “oh” be in lower case? Another example would be Hermione, don’t be daft, you’ll love the Winter Ball. where the second comma should either be a full stop or a semi-colon. Furthermore, in the first quarter of the story, you didn’t italicise thoughts, and in the sentence “George,” said Angelina in delight, “How wonderful to see you., the continued speech needs to begin with lower case. I noticed that mistake in several places and not only in this one-shot. This and commas instead of semi-colons or full stops seems to be a greater problem of yours.

But all over, the one-shot was fantastically written and an entertaining read.

Author's Response: Hi, Bine. Thank you for the review. I'm very pleased you liked the description as it's something I had to work at for this - description is not my strong suit. And neither is punctuation - LOL. Actually, I understand the rules much better now (thanks to people like yourself explaining!) so I have far less errors in my later stories. It's amazing the difference five months can make *grins*. I think I've caught all the errors now. Thanks again for keeping me on my toes. Carole xxx

Name: captburke (Signed) · Date: 12/26/08 1:21 · For: You dance divinely, Mr Weasley.
I absolutely love this story. I am a reader not a writer, so when I read something I like and can visualize my world is complete for the moment. The problem is I can never get enough of reading.

Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review. I really appreciate it.

Name: Mudblood_and_Proud_of_it357 (Signed) · Date: 12/23/08 16:30 · For: You dance divinely, Mr Weasley.
Wow, Carole! This is great! You pulled together so many different elements--the grief, the romance, and everything else--very skillfully and in some parts humorously! Well done!!! And I love Hermione's line: "No, they flaming well are not!" That made me giggle! Good job!!

Author's Response: Ah, thank you, Mapoi. I'm glad you liked it. I enjoyed writing it although I nearly came to grief several times because I kept putting it to one side. I'm pleased I finally got on with it as George/Angelina are rapidly becoming another obsession.

Carole xxx

Name: Lucius_Vorenus (Signed) · Date: 12/23/08 13:39 · For: You dance divinely, Mr Weasley.
Yes, I agree with the first reviewer.
This a plausible story about how George and Angelina could have gotten together.

It is well written and I had an enjoyable time reading it.
Continue writing in this style about this pairing.

Author's Response: Thank-you very much for the review. I do have some other ideas about George and Angelina. I think so many people are against them, because she went out with Fred, that it makes me want to promote them even more. Carole xxx

Name: JustLikeHermione77 (Signed) · Date: 12/23/08 13:00 · For: You dance divinely, Mr Weasley.
*tear* i have to say, angelina/george fics are starting to grow on me...great job! :-)

Author's Response: Aww, thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. George is rapidly becomiung my favourite Weasley.

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