Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/09/12 20:11
Chapter: All That Was Left Were The Losses

That was such a good story!(: I hope you right more fics! I noticed that you have been a member since 08/08/08... Well, I don't know why I'm saying this, but my birthday is 08/09, haha...(:

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Nataliek
Date: 12/27/08 19:07
Chapter: All That Was Left Were The Losses

Hmm, I like this. The very small details - like using the word "mousy" to describe the change in Tonks's hair, as Rowling did in The Order of the Phoenix - are really nice and complement the story well.

Very sad, but I like the way you captured their grief, especially Ron's. There are many, many people who have been in his place and felt like that (or rather *didn't* feel, since it's numbness I'm talking about) and it is so realistic the way you wrote it. Very nice job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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