That was such a good story!(: I hope you right more fics! I noticed that you have been a member since 08/08/08... Well, I don't know why I'm saying this, but my birthday is 08/09, haha...(:
Author's Response: Thank you!
Hmm, I like this. The very small details - like using the word "mousy" to describe the change in Tonks's hair, as Rowling did in The Order of the Phoenix - are really nice and complement the story well.
Very sad, but I like the way you captured their grief, especially Ron's. There are many, many people who have been in his place and felt like that (or rather *didn't* feel, since it's numbness I'm talking about) and it is so realistic the way you wrote it. Very nice job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!