Reviewer: MagicalPurpleLion
Date: 05/01/09 14:58
Chapter: Broken Pictures

:) great story, plz hurry and finish it soon

Reviewer: MagicalPurpleLion
Date: 05/01/09 14:55
Chapter: Broken Pictures

:) great story, plz hurry and finish it soon

Reviewer: turkeylurkey
Date: 04/14/09 22:51
Chapter: Prologue: May 2, 1998

very good!

Reviewer: masterwoods
Date: 04/12/09 21:46
Chapter: Broken Pictures

Great story. Please post more.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 04/09/09 11:17
Chapter: Broken Pictures

Not a bad chapter. Probably be interesting when the rest get there and Harry has to skirt around everything and everyone.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 02/05/09 13:43
Chapter: One Great Big Happy Family, Almost

Ginny will definitely know it's Harry. Molly knew, Hermione will figure it out in a heartbeat, and Ginny, she'll know just being in the same room.

Author's Response: I wouldn't be so sure, they definitely suspect but they won't be looking hard as they think Harry's not even coming. Remember, they haven't seen him in four years, since he was seventeen, and he's matured quite a bit. I believe that people see what they want, or suspect, to see, and that is very true in this case.

Reviewer: siilly_bookworm_28
Date: 12/30/08 14:59
Chapter: The Past Comes Back to Hurt You

Do they go to the wedding? I'm anxiously awaiting the next update!!!

Reviewer: crystalphoenix
Date: 12/29/08 21:01
Chapter: The Past Comes Back to Hurt You

interesting

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 12/29/08 19:30
Chapter: The Past Comes Back to Hurt You

I'm liking this

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 12/29/08 16:59
Chapter: The Past Comes Back to Hurt You

Oh boy, I guess you can't stay hidden. It looks like Harry is going to have to go back home. First he needs to get rid of Draco. I don't understand why he couldn't stun and arrest him before.

Author's Response: That's a good observation, wondering why Harry just didn't stun Malfoy. Truth be told, I hadn't even thought of that until you mentioned it, maybe because in my mind it wasn't a possibility for him. At first, he wanted to find out who the Death Eaters were, and when Draco made himself known, Harry was just so stunned. Then Draco started duelling and Harry just got caught up in fighting back, I guess. Thank you so much for the review!

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 12/29/08 16:48
Chapter: September, 2002

I'm not quite sure what I think about this. I just know I'm compelled to read it. I guess I have a hard time thinking Harry would leave for so long.

Reviewer: yukikiyokiralacus
Date: 12/29/08 16:06
Chapter: The Past Comes Back to Hurt You

So Malfoy is the the antagonist, huh? I wonder if Harry would reveal who he really is to Dave?I Like this chapter, keep writing please! I can't wait till Harry reunites with his friends!

Reviewer: yukikiyokiralacus
Date: 12/29/08 16:05
Chapter: The Past Comes Back to Hurt You

So Malfoy is the the antagonist, huh? I wonder if Harry would reveal who he really is to Dave?I Like this chapter, keep writing please! I can't wait till Harry reunites with his friends!

Reviewer: yukikiyokiralacus
Date: 12/29/08 16:05
Chapter: The Past Comes Back to Hurt You

So Malfoy is the the antagonist, huh? I wonder if Harry would reveal who he really is to Dave?I Like this chapter, keep writing please! I can't wait till Harry reunites with his friends!

Reviewer: yukikiyokiralacus
Date: 12/20/08 3:16
Chapter: September, 2002

So Harry is disguised as someone named John huh? Thought is was upsetting that he didn't accept an invitation from Ron and Hermione. Poor Ginny. I guess they are still in contact with Harry. I really find this story interesting and can't wait to read more of it. Do you have an idea of how many chapters this story is going to be and how it's going to end already? Just curious. Please update more chapters soon!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! I do have a very rough outline of the rest of the story written down and so far I'm looking at around 13 chapters, although that could change very easily.

Reviewer: jayinski
Date: 12/08/08 17:37
Chapter: Prologue: May 2, 1998

it is good write soon

Jayinski

Reviewer: procyonblack
Date: 11/30/08 15:01
Chapter: Prologue: May 2, 1998

I really like this. Please continue with writing it!

Reviewer: Quilter
Date: 11/30/08 13:24
Chapter: Prologue: May 2, 1998

Interesting concept, please continue.

Reviewer: Mudblood_and_Proud_of_it357
Date: 11/30/08 11:50
Chapter: Prologue: May 2, 1998

Wow, I think this was a really gripping prologue, and I can't wait to hear more! Update soon, please!
Mudblood_and_Proud_of_it357

Reviewer: phoenix_19
Date: 11/30/08 4:22
Chapter: Prologue: May 2, 1998

It's a really good start.
I love these kind of fics...
Hope you update soon!

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