Reviewer: Gwen Evens
Date: 12/13/10 14:36
Chapter: Prologue: May 2, 1998

Omy, I want to now what happens next. Though could you use Dave or David not both it kinda got confusing when all of a sudden for about a whole Chapter David became Dave and then in the next it went back and forth. Oops, I almost forgot I stayed up tell 1:44 last night reading from chapter one to chapter nine. It was that good!:D

Reviewer: Vikula_P
Date: 04/24/10 13:30
Chapter: Prologue: May 2, 1998

Did you abandon this story? It seems that you're not planning on continuing it, and that would be very sad, since it's a good one...

Author's Response: Yes, for now, this story is temporarily abandoned. Sorry! :( I just haven't been motivated to write it and the ending I originally had planned seems weak and fraught with plot holes to me now. I'm glad you liked it, though.

Reviewer: Vikula_P
Date: 03/28/10 7:31
Chapter: Prologue: May 2, 1998

i can't wait for the next chapter! PLEASE update soon...

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 03/23/10 13:59
Chapter: All That I'm After

Oh! I just found this story and could't quit reading!!! Great! I love it! Update soon!!

Reviewer: masterwoods
Date: 12/29/09 23:56
Chapter: All That I'm After

Please update soon. It seems everybody with a great story just quits. Please don't I love the story and would like to finish it with you.

Author's Response: I am so so so sorry for leaving this for so long. I have an excuse, although I'm afraid it's not very good: First, I was focusing on my other chaptered fic because I didn't have any inspiration for this on. Second, I got inspiration and then my laptop got stolen along with most of the next chapter, so I've had to start it from stratch again. And of course, it's always harder to write a chapter another time when you were happier with it the first time. I haven't gotten that inspiration back yet, but I hope it doesn't take much longer; I'm really missing writing this story.

Reviewer: masterwoods
Date: 10/24/09 0:24
Chapter: Prologue: May 2, 1998

Hello, did you quit? Where is the updates for a great story? Its a shame.

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for reviewing! No, I havent officially quit, but Ive had major writer's block since starting school, plus, i just have next to no time to write because of school! I know where Im going with the story and i hope to complete it someday, but for now please just be patient.

Reviewer: teddyvictoirefreak
Date: 09/06/09 15:16
Chapter: All That I'm After

Poor poor Harry,poor poor Ron,poor poor me no new chapter.Hurry up.

Reviewer: SecretsandLies
Date: 08/23/09 18:09
Chapter: Prologue: May 2, 1998

I have to say, this is REALLYY good. really! you should totally add more!

Reviewer: BrianG
Date: 08/19/09 23:06
Chapter: False Pretence

Really good so far

Reviewer: gweasley95
Date: 08/11/09 11:47
Chapter: All That I'm After

I love it! please update soon!

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 08/10/09 23:39
Chapter: All That I'm After

Great chapter! Like the way you're developing your story. Enjoying it very much.

Reviewer: Zenny
Date: 08/10/09 21:43
Chapter: All That I'm After

Great story! I can't wait for the next chapter! It made me sad when I finished this one knowing that I had to wait to read more.

Reviewer: yukikiyokiralacus
Date: 08/10/09 16:27
Chapter: All That I'm After

Wow! I wasn't expecting conversations with Snape and Dumbledore! Brilliant idea! I hope they face Malfoy and rescue Ginny and Hermione soon! I can't wait for next update! (Hopefully you'll be able to before school starts!)

Author's Response: That conversation was something i was really nervous about; it didn't really come out how i'd wanted it to, but im glad you still enjoyed it. i hope to get the next chapter up soon, but ive had a bit of writer's block so it might take a while.

Reviewer: Aras Potter
Date: 08/10/09 14:39
Chapter: All That I'm After

Really brilliant story, I love it. The past couple of chapters have kept me on the edge of my seat. I can't wait to read more!

Aras

Reviewer: barrytrotterlovesginny
Date: 08/10/09 10:43
Chapter: All That I'm After

this is good - where's the rest? wheres the rest?

please keep writing! 8)

Reviewer: andreamrrll
Date: 08/02/09 1:24
Chapter: Prologue: May 2, 1998

I love this fanfic!! It's such an amazing and creative story!

I read all nine chapters (what is up as of today) in one sitting, and the entire time, I was drawn in!

I cannot wait for the next chapters!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Zenny
Date: 07/26/09 21:16
Chapter: Not a Killer

Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one! :)

Reviewer: jsl21
Date: 07/26/09 2:55
Chapter: Not a Killer

great story but whats the ending?

Author's Response: You have to read to find out, what's the point of reading if I tell you the ending ahead of time?

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 07/25/09 23:46
Chapter: Not a Killer

Harry and Ron will prevail. Draco is a delusional madman.

Reviewer: yukikiyokiralacus
Date: 07/25/09 12:18
Chapter: Not a Killer

This chapter was awesome! Made my day to see it updated! PLEASE CONTINUE! KEEP IT UP!

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