That was cool. keep up the good work.
that was beautiful :)
That was stupendous. Everyone who loves HP, hated the deaths of those we came to love,Remus,Tonks,Sirius, Dobby'and especially Fred. This was a lovely way of Fred saying goodbye to his family.
This is such a wonderful story. I love how you've included elements from the afterlife (namely Sirius *wink*) and the obstacles that Fred faces are not just physical. Esmeralda is intriguing, too.
The conversation between George and Fred is inspired. Incredibly touching, too. I'm not ashamed to admit it but I started crying at that point.
Hmmm, now I thought this was complete, so it's interesting that you've not marked it as complete. I take it that a certain someone is nagging to return and also someone else is waiting for an entrance.
Brilliant story, Terri.
This is really a great story. I'm not sure if it's supposed to continue or not, but if it stops here it will have a perfect ending. If it continues, well I'll have to wait and see.
This is fascinating
Awww, that's so sad... and sweet. Poor Fred!
*SNIFF* great story!! :-)
Wonderful story. Being your beta, I obviously read it before, but I read it again today, and I have to say, I still really like it. LOL. It STILL brought me to tears!
Great job. I hope to see lots more from you soon!
ohh poor fred!! *sniff* update soon! :-)