it's good to see the whole gang back togeather again. good chapter can't wait for the next one.
Haha, I forgot they were barred last year. I like reminders of AQATTC. :) Interesting new characters...from the summary it seems like we'll be getting to know them better. Thanks for the update, I can't wait for the next chapter!
This chapter was really good. I'm not surprised Darla got showed up like that- poor girl. So what exactly is the MASE program? Is it like an exchange program? What is Blacksberg, like some kind of military academy? They sound so rigid and robot-like (until they start talking). I think Alexandra should choose PME as her elective; wasn't she rather good at it last year?
Ahhh. The infamus Diana Grimm! She may seem a little more relaxed than her sister, but I suspect she's just as sneaky. I'm looking forward to seeing more of her in the story. Can't wait for the next chapter! I was VERY happy to see that you have the story completely written (smart!) and that this would not become one of the many incomplete stories.
Ha, I knew Dean Grimm would never do something so reckless! Wow, her twin, huh? I get the feeling they're not exactly on the best of terms. So is her card charmed so Alexandra can't throw it out? Or destroy it? I wouldn't put it past her. I'm so happy you updated so quickly! I love this series. Can't wait to read more!
While I've come to like Dean Grimm, I am holding my reservations off on Diana - like Alex, my first inclination is to not trust her. I didn't see this little twist coming, but I like the first two chapters! It's very intriguing reading, and I love Alex's spunk! And fiestiness. And all those other words that mean that. :)
WOW!! You just made my day (stressed with finals) when I saw that you started this story again. Thanks so much for sharing your talent with us.
wow the dean's sister, she seems a heck nicer then the dean Alex can be pretty annoying and mean
Yay! I was so happy to see the first chapter of another Alexandra Quick story! Haha, that's so typical Alexandra- getting grounded during summer break. What was Ms. Grimm doing in the mall? Was she there to talk to Alexandra about her earlier accidental use of magic? If so, how did she know to find her at the mall? At any rate, she had very good timing- although surely it would have been somewhat better for her just to show up herself, rather than using magic to stop the boys. Shouldn't she be more worried about using magic in front of Muggles?
please, for the love of god, get the rest of the chapters up here as soon as you can! i am so happy to be able to read about alex again, i can't wait to see what happens.
Yea! Alex is back! I loved AQATTC and Hogwarts Houses Divided. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
im so glad your back with alexandra stories! :) I dont really ever find anything to criticize, so ill just say i enjoyed it and leave it at that.
i can't wait to see what shanagins she gets up to this year, i love her charter great writting
OH YEA!!! I was so excited to see this story posted!!! It's like the magic of Harry Potter all over again! Ah, I missed Alex, with her penchant for finding trouble everywhere. I can't wait to see how this year progresses!
Ohhhhh Yeah! What a beginning! You just HAD to bring in Ms. Grimm didn't you?! I predict another INSTANT CLASSIC! Sorry, thats my inner Trelawny in me?! hahhaaha. This beginning was soo good. The overall flow of the chapter didn't drag, and I was enjoying every sentence & paragraph. Ohhh PLEASE update soon, my favorite fan fic heroine is back!! Thank you for getting this out so soon! I loved 'Hogwarts Houses Divided' btw!! Can't wait for that sequel to come out after I thoroughly read this one!!!!