Reviewer: ahattab33
Date: 01/10/09 13:33
Chapter: Threats

Yea, an update! And finally, a reference to the mysterious "Lands Below!" Of course she doesn't listen to his warning...I'm holding off on my opinion of Max and his interest in Alex...but I don't know if it's wise for her to continue going! Man, she attracts trouble!! Great chapter again as usual! I love her spunk!

Reviewer: crystalphoenix
Date: 12/29/08 15:44
Chapter: The Mors Mortis Society

Yay! You updated!
Hmm... So she decided to join MMS. I'm not sure that's the wisest decision, especially considering they want their members to sign in blood. I bet the scroll has some sort of hex on it. And what's Maximilian King doing there? I would have thought they'd only invite people who're actually from Charmbridge. Unless the society has branches at the other schools too?

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 12/28/08 20:10
Chapter: The Mors Mortis Society


Reviewer: ahattab33
Date: 12/28/08 11:33
Chapter: The Mors Mortis Society

Very interesting chapter. I wonder who decides to send out the invitations. Interesting group of people. And I'm sure Dean Grimm must know about this group...what goes on at Charmbridge that she doesn't know about? It will be very interesting to see where this society goes. And I hate it when her and Anna fight! I was hoping the JROC would start to toughen her up some...maybe it will, they haven't been at it that long.

Reviewer: crystalphoenix
Date: 12/22/08 18:25
Chapter: The Mall

Update please! It's been a week!

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 12/20/08 1:54
Chapter: New Wands

I am eagerly awaiting the next chapters. This is an excellent story

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 12/19/08 23:47
Chapter: The Special Inquisitor

I like new plot twists.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 12/19/08 23:33
Chapter: The Mall

Someone's keeping close watch over Alex, and that's probably a good thing.

Reviewer: Phoenix 86
Date: 12/19/08 22:40
Chapter: New Wands

as if things couldn't get thougher!

Reviewer: ahattab33
Date: 12/16/08 9:57
Chapter: New Wands

If there is one thing that will annoy Alex but possibly be good for her, it would be joining the equivalent of the ROTC. She's doing good so far...

Interesting turn at the end of the chapter...Can't wait to see what happens next! I love that the updates are quick, as this is one of my favorites stories!

Reviewer: crystalphoenix
Date: 12/15/08 20:09
Chapter: New Wands

Wow, that's pretty harsh. Making them join the JROC- taking away their electives, too. I can understand that she'd be angry at their prejudices- I would be, too- but it seems like a punishment that rather exceeds the crime. So now they have to be in this military-like organization. Somehow I don't think Alexandra is going to be able to keep her mouth shut the entire semester.

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 12/15/08 18:31
Chapter: New Wands

what has her crow done, is right. she is just a magnet for trouble, she didn't even do anything that bad this time and her whole semster is ruined poor girl. can't wait for the next one

Reviewer: Kantaka
Date: 12/13/08 10:45
Chapter: Cultures

First of all, thanks for answering my review. I just knew you hadn't chosen the name randomly! *victory dance*
Now, Diana's middle name being Alecto, makes her all the more siniester.

And speaking of siniester, we have a Black teacher this year. Suspicious, highly suspicious. A long lost realtive of dearest Sirius, perhaps? I really want to know who he is and what's his part in the coming year!!

Now, this fiesty side of our darling bookworm is really unexpected! And, Alex ends up getting into trouble because she's trying to help! I mean, David really could have made a little effort, right?

I think Alex's right to feel a little sympathy for the japanese girl. Though, IF what Anna says is true (that Tomo started it, and even hexed her) she deserves it! I mean why do you do around calling someone names without even knowing her?? That's riddiculus!

It's funny, thought. Last year, it was Alex the one fighting her nemesis everytime she crossed paths in the hallways, now she's the one separating Anna and her arch-enemy.

As for the mystery boy.. Maximilian King! What a strong name! I fear he's going to be anything but friendly with Alex from now on, right?

As usual I'm left wanting more chaps!


- C

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 12/12/08 10:00
Chapter: Cultures

i really love all the diffrent wizarding cultures you've put into the story. Anna gettign into it enstead of Alex is great best chapter yetr can't wait for the next one to come out

Reviewer: ahattab33
Date: 12/12/08 8:23
Chapter: Cultures

Wow, look at Anna and her spunk when she gets angry! Despite the fact that the chapter ended on a...more dramatic note, there were more points in the chapter that had me laughing out loud. And its good to be back at Charmbridge!

Reviewer: crystalphoenix
Date: 12/11/08 21:02
Chapter: Cultures

Hahaha! Poor Alexandra. Well, at least it's not even partially her fault this time- she was just trying to break up the fight. I don't get why Tomo would provoke Anna in the first place- she's by herself, while Anna has other kids to back her up.
Yay! They're back at Charmbridge! Sounds like Alexandra is in for an interesting year.

Reviewer: harrietamidala
Date: 12/11/08 0:30
Chapter: The Mall

Speaking of Alexandra's slow trusting of people, and Diana Grimm, remember Ben Journey? She could be another Journey, although it's too early to tell.

Reviewer: Kantaka
Date: 12/10/08 18:31
Chapter: The Mall

Yeepee! Sequel to AQATTC is up!! And there are three chaps in already! Sooo happy to hear its finished and we just need to wait for the chaps to get posted! You're a role model writer for that only!
Let's see, I have a question reggarding this very intriguing new character that's Grimm's twin...
It's a tinny detail really, but still, you, like JKR don't seem one to put little things there without a reason. Diana Alecto Grimm. Isn't her middle name the same of one of the hateful Carrow brothers, torment of Howarts during DH? Is it just a coincidence? You just liked the name and forgot about it? (and I'm a bored little HPfan with a lot of spare time, of course)
That being said, I'd also like to point out, as Alex said, Martin's a jerk. Pobably used Darla when he was by himself and bored on the cruise and, if he really enjoyed her company, he's too much of a coward to admit it and bare his friend's (whom shall be considered jerks, too unless they demonstrate the contrary) teasing. Stupid teens and their useless, superficial, cruel and pointless peer-pressure. I'm hell-bent against it, but you portray it most skillfully.
I'm more intrigued about this Max bloke, who seemed to be in charge and puzzled about Alex.
I really liked the detail of Alex's dirty look towards David. It was funny!

Can't wait till the next chap!

- C

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! You will definitely see more of the Stormcrows.

As for Diana Grimm, I can assure you, I choose names with great care. ;)

(The Carrows weren't brothers, btw -- they were brother and sister, Alecto being the sister.)

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 12/10/08 12:37
Chapter: The Mall

So glad you started this story.

Reviewer: Checkerspot
Date: 12/10/08 8:34
Chapter: Stormcrows

I completely forgot they had been barred! And it's good to see the gang back together again. I suspect we may be seeing more of the BMI crew as well. I like the mystery around the boy who was watching Alex. Might he have someting to do with her father? Looking forward to the next chapter!

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