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Reviews For The Loss

Name: Trivia Camlee (Signed) · Date: 11/27/08 15:24 · For: Chapter 1: The Loss
Very nice; each verse held something new and meaningful. Just a small nitpick; in the line "Believes you sure to stir." I think it's supposed to be 'you're", but maybe thats the way you wanted it.

Great Job :)


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