Can't wait for more!
okay but what bout the second chapter? dont leave me hanging and i wanna read it soon u have me intreged
I know how she feels. After going through something like that all you want to do is die...
This was wonderful! I loved all your descriptive details; it really put me there and as I ran over each word it only left me hungry for me, so that I was dying to find out what happened next. It was a bit short, but no worries; it made for a quick, though highly intriguing read and I can't wait for the next one! I love the direction this one took; keep up the great work!!
But very real, none of that soppy OOC, cliche fairy-tale ending stuff.
I really like your style of writing, and the way you wrote her emotions was absolutely amazing.
Also, I like how you aren't focusing on the rape itself, but the emotions involved.
I am looking forward to your next chapter, and I am dying to know all the background info on this.
Hopefully the twisted 'bad guy' isn't Ron, Harry, or some 'evil' Slytherin.
Please don't abandon this story, it looks extremely promising, and I am looking forward to an update.
kind of twisted but i keeps you on the edge of your seat . keep going.
please please please carry on this story i realy want to know what happened to hermione PPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
i luv it
and I'll wait for your fiction
and hope that you'll continuous soon
Author's Response: thank you so much!
Simply marvelous!! PLEASE keep writing. It has lots of promise. Later on in the story, would you please give some background on how Hermione got into this predicament, whenever it seems to be the right time to add it in. I love this story, and just wish there were more like it out there! I can't wait to find out who the "bad guy" is! I hope it's wonderfully twisted!
Author's Response: lol yah ur stepping a few steps ahead, but im glad that ur looking forward to that. im planning on spending a good chunk of or a whole chapter on explaining that.
wow tht was good....n really sad....u write good i like it....oh th suspense i wonder hu did it....plz dont make it like harry or ron or something tht wud just kill it....its good tho...
Author's Response: no it'll be twisted, but not that twisted lol thanks for reading!!
wow i have no idea who could've done it and so far not too much OCness..... sweetness
Author's Response: thanks lol i'm trying not to be really graphic because i know that a lot of people really find rape offensive and, to be honest, i know someone who was raped as a younger woman, so im focusing on her emotions and not the actual events. thanks for the review!
Wow. Just when I thought I should give up on Harry Potter fan fiction. I have not found many good pieces to enthrall me since The Deathly Hallows. I read the summary and thought I would give this a try.
I am so glad I did. The story is common but very very different from others. I love the parallel strucutre you utilized. It was very strong and not overly descriptive. You make good use of descriptions, but you did not try to make that a huge part of the story to fill up space. The emotions felt by Hermione were so raw and powerful.
Rape is something that no one can ever fully get over. Please do not forget that. I am very vested now and hope you update again soon. Amazing job on the intro!
Author's Response: oh my goodness, thank you! i wasnt very confident in this fic until now. i'll do my best to make you proud!
pls add more
Author's Response: i will. my computer's acting weird, but hopefully it will be in within the next few hours or days.
hey...im not reely a fan of such topics...but im extremely fond of a caring n compassionate draco!!! pls dnt delay d updates!
Author's Response: im not really either, but i recently read a book that is somewhat similiar to this. u know, the two poeple that are enemies come together to save each other. yada yada yada. and i was really intrigued. so thanks and i hope u continue to enjoy it!
i like it a lot!
Author's Response: thank u so much! im really glad to hear that u liked it. chapters two and three should be up soon.
Your writing style looks good and this story has promise. My only nit-picky thing is that in order for the title to be grammatically correct, it should be "Et Ensuite Il m'a Trouve" but I'm not sure if you can change that. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: oohhh thanks i'll see if i can change it. thanks so much!