Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 11/20/08 2:04
Chapter: A Final Act of Betrayal

Very good, Terri. You've done well with the prompts I hardly recognised where they were. Even though I know how this is going to turn out, there's a part of me screaming at Sirius to hex Peter quickly. *grins*

The scene in the church was very atmospheric.

Have to admit for one ghastly moment I thought Carole was going to be Peter's mother! Good revenge. I look forward to the next chapter where Sirius escapes, finds Carole and realises she's the love of his life.

Author's Response: Carole,

I wish I could have had him hexing Peter and winning the day, but canon says otherwise. As for you being Peter's mother, never even considered it. And there won't be a chapter of him escaping to you. Sorry, dear, that scenario just isn't in the cards.


Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 11/19/08 3:58
Chapter: The Search Begins

I was going to wait until the last chapter to review this but I can't resist - so here you go, Terri.

This is masterful. You have captured Sirius' emotions perfectly. His anger, his utter devastation and his thirst for revenge. I want to grab hold of him and demand he listens to the fortune teller but knowing you as the Queen of Canon - that won't be allowed.

I can't wait to read the rest.

Author's Response: Carole,

Hearing from you that I captured Sirius perfectly means so much to me. You know how much I love that man. I too wish I could write a different ending, but alas, I must stick to canon. You know I am all about sticking to canon. LOL


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