Reviews For Dark of the Moon
Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 07/22/09 17:54
Chapter: Letters

amazing and brilliant. plz update soon!

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 07/22/09 17:54
Chapter: Letters

amazing and brilliant. plz update soon!

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 05/09/09 21:23
Chapter: Bleed

interesting story. i love the idea. and the characters they're all so different and funny. love merle :)

 

please update soon :)

Reviewer: Mila Zakharov
Date: 01/15/09 0:17
Chapter: Nightmares

Lovely! I really liked this!.Though, I'll admit, when I started reading I didn't thought I would like it as much as I did.

The last scene, the one from Rosalie's point of view was the one that captivated me the most, the one that makes me want to know what's going to happen next.

I also really liked Neve and Merle, and their (sub?)plot...I think it's very believable, especially Neve's shyness and how she admires Lily and Rosalie. You don't see many OC doing that, so kudos!
Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it more than you thought you would, that means I'm doing something right. And it's nice to hear you like Neve and Merle - an author always loves to hear that her OC's are believable.

Reviewer: 11phoenixtears
Date: 01/13/09 15:44
Chapter: Nightmares

wow. I can't wait for an update. great plot so far!

Reviewer: Treacle_Heart
Date: 01/01/09 0:46
Chapter: Nightmares

I'm hooked. I can't wait for you to update! :]
--Julia

Author's Response: Yay - that means I'm doing something right :)

Reviewer: Stubbornly_appeared
Date: 11/24/08 23:36
Chapter: Nightmares

Interesting... have you read 'Betwixt'?

Author's Response: I'm glad you thought it was interesting, though I can't say I've read that book. Good read?

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