nice twist, however, i very much doubt a six year old would say bollocks!
very sweet.. i couldnt figure out the couple at first. draco with a red headed wife? ron with an artificially redheaded hermione? it wasnt until scorpius spoke to rose about missing her mother that i understood. good job with the mysteriousness.
Wow, I really liked this! At first it was a little confusing cause you didn't know Scorpius and Rose were looking back on the memory, but I still liked it because it kept you guessing. I loved the ending, too! Really well done!
Hehe a cute little story. I spent a fair bit of time going "Whoes the man and the women?" to myself, before I kept reading and found out. Nice twist. I enjoyed this first chapter, keep up the good work :)