Reviewer: loopyloopylupin
Date: 07/09/09 5:57
Chapter: It Began with a Push

nice twist, however, i very much doubt a six year old would say bollocks!

Reviewer: rosemerta
Date: 11/16/08 19:38
Chapter: It Began with a Push

very sweet.. i couldnt figure out the couple at first. draco with a red headed wife? ron with an artificially redheaded hermione? it wasnt until scorpius spoke to rose about missing her mother that i understood. good job with the mysteriousness.

Reviewer: Mudblood_and_Proud_of_it357
Date: 11/16/08 9:34
Chapter: It Began with a Push

Wow, I really liked this! At first it was a little confusing cause you didn't know Scorpius and Rose were looking back on the memory, but I still liked it because it kept you guessing. I loved the ending, too! Really well done!

Reviewer: helz_belz
Date: 11/16/08 3:46
Chapter: It Began with a Push

Hehe a cute little story. I spent a fair bit of time going "Whoes the man and the women?" to myself, before I kept reading and found out. Nice twist. I enjoyed this first chapter, keep up the good work :)

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