Reviews For Reciprocation
Reviewer: ILoveHarry 3_14
Date: 02/23/10 12:08
Chapter: Always Where I Need to Be

I love it. Your story is wonderful and I look forward to more updates.

Reviewer: kkim__sh
Date: 01/05/09 22:56
Chapter: Apocalypse Please

i really liked how u started this story!! pleease update soon!!

Reviewer: kkim__sh
Date: 01/05/09 22:54
Chapter: Apocalypse Please

i really liked how u started this story!! pleease update soon!!

Reviewer: ginnypotter_89
Date: 12/25/08 22:29
Chapter: Apocalypse Please

OH MYGOD!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT HAPPENS!!!???  this is better than when harry used youknowhos name in DH and half a dozen DEs showed up!!!!!!

Reviewer: Rikku
Date: 11/14/08 19:52
Chapter: Apocalypse Please

I really liked this chapter. You start out great with something exciting without making it seem unrealistic that the train is attacked by Death Eaters. Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Reviewer: Blubber
Date: 11/13/08 18:40
Chapter: Apocalypse Please

i like it, nice start! keep going!

Reviewer: harrypforever
Date: 11/12/08 18:37
Chapter: Apocalypse Please

I really loved the way you began and ended this chapter. Good start to the story, I like your writing style it is very poetic. You might want to try and give more detail on how Lily is feeling, don't feel pressured to make the chapter too long, because I would love to read more! Really, great start.

Reviewer: way 2 HP obsesed
Date: 11/12/08 16:09
Chapter: Apocalypse Please

whoa, i want to read more! update soon!

Reviewer: blackbeauty7
Date: 11/12/08 11:57
Chapter: Apocalypse Please

i love it! u better update fast.

Reviewer: ILoveHarry 3_14
Date: 11/11/08 21:17
Chapter: Apocalypse Please

Please update soon! I love it, I am already hooked on this story.

Reviewer: phoenix_fille
Date: 11/11/08 16:09
Chapter: Apocalypse Please

Very... dramatic. A bit of shock, but it seems to be an interesting story.

Reviewer: hpsupafan
Date: 11/11/08 15:40
Chapter: Apocalypse Please

OMG you certainly know how to pull someone in! *favorites*

Reviewer: Rhi for HP
Date: 11/11/08 15:12
Chapter: Apocalypse Please

Nice beginning! Lily/James is a great ship, and this is a really promising story. You have a nice, fluid writing style. I just have a few questions: why is Lily alone at the train station (wouldn't her parents want to see her off)? And also, I have to wonder if Dumbledore would really let Death Eaters come so close to his students! Oh well.

["I saw them, he said] --there should be an ending quotation mark there.

Great job! Looking forward to reading more. :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much - this is exactly the kind of feedback I love. I'll try and fix that right away! :) Also, I explain a bit about the Dumbledore issue in the next chapter, though the idea of Lily's parents had totally slipped my mind.

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