Reviewer: hermionepal98
Date: 05/31/12 20:15
Chapter: Chapter 1

I liked it a lot :) I feel for snaps though :(

Reviewer: Twilight0Potter
Date: 05/03/10 17:45
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was so sad!!
Very good, don't get me wrong, I loved it.
Now, I really want to give Sev a hug...

Reviewer: Crazycow89
Date: 04/06/10 6:27
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is really sad...yet it happens. The sort of story that (practically) makes you cry. This is lovely, with lots of meaning too. Actually, I didn't think James would ask Lily to marry him so soon, but I think it really fits with the story. The characterization was also done very well.

Reviewer: peacesmilepotter
Date: 11/05/09 18:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!! That was so beautiful! i even got a little teary eyed at the end, even though i love james and lilly and not snape and lilly!

Reviewer: Nitwit Blubber Oddment Tweak x
Date: 04/07/09 15:55
Chapter: Chapter 1

Beautiful; simply beautiful. Everything flowed so well and you portrayed Severus' feelings perfectly. In fact, I felt like my heart was being torn apart too as I read this; his pain was so believable. Well done :D

Reviewer: inspirations
Date: 11/17/08 13:54
Chapter: Chapter 1

Severus peered out from behind a clump of bushes on Hogwarts grounds at the two figures silhouetted in the twilight. - did you mean 'in the Hogwarts...'? Great story, it was a nice insight into a deeper Severus. And a different James to the one we're used to seeing aswell. I felt so sorry for Severus. You can see how much it is tearing him apart to hear them together, but as soon as they are secured to each other, he can't stay any longer. Truly lovely. Well done!

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