Reviews For Last Flight
Reviewer: Mudblood_and_Proud_of_it357
Date: 11/06/08 18:54
Chapter: Last Flight

Wow. This is a very impressive poem, and I especially liked the ending:But now…

I’m not sure that I can fly,
That way again,
And I won’t like this goodbye,
But I’ll accept it in the end.

And I will almost, always, never,
Ever forget,
And I’m not sure if this is right,
But this is my last flight.

This is my last flight.

Very well done, and I can't wait to read more from you!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I thought it was a good way to round out the poem as well, with a sentence that sums it all up. I do have a lot I'm working on, so keep looking! Again, thanks. -Eva

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