Reviewer: Dad
Date: 10/04/15 17:18
Chapter: Chapter 6 - Birthday Trouble

I hope this is a bit more than the usual Harry/Ginny misunderstanding. We all know where it will finish. The Malfoy bit looks more interesting.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/04/15 15:48
Chapter: Chapter 6 - Birthday Trouble

I loved the expanding wallet idea. I really could use something like that. I think Ginny might be better off if she just went with the flow. Sometimes a person should just keep her mouth shut.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/02/15 14:11
Chapter: Chapter 5 - Return of the Princess

Thank God, Hermione's back. I wonder if she'll move in with Harry and Ron. I think she'll love Ron despite his singing. Hope you update soon.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/02/15 13:52
Chapter: Chapter 4- Thoughts and Fights

So glad Harry and Ron made up. Ron seemed pretty excited to move in with Harry. That did sound just like Ron though--to fly off the handle before finding out that Harry and Ginny were making up from their disagreement. I hope you update more frequently than you have in the past:D

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/02/15 12:25
Chapter: Chapter 3-Together and Apart

I can see that you've chosen to portray Ron as not really approving of Harry's and Ginny's relationship. I can see why the male Weasleys are so protective of Ginny. She's their only sister and she's the baby of the family. I'm sure she really doesn't want to be that protected. I've always thought Grimmauld Placce sounded like a lovely house--just a little dusty is all.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/01/15 15:25
Chapter: Chapter 2- Back to the Burrow

I suppose it did look to Ginny that Harry was leaving her again. It was a little selfish of her though to act like Harry hadn't done anything at all.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/01/15 13:29
Chapter: Chapter 1- Sorting Things Out

The fact that you've taken so long to update gives me some hope. I have one story that I haven't updated in about three years but I'd like to finish it when I'm finished with the current story I'm working on. So far, so good. I guess I'll keep reading this story:D

Author's Response: I just wanted to take a moment to thank you for reading and reviewing! I wrote the first 6 or 7 chapters of this story when I was very young, and am now attempting to write the rest! I went back through and tried to edit some things from the earlier chapters, but it was a little hard to see where I was going with some of the plots! Hopefully you will notice an increase in both chapter length and readability in the later chapters (when they get posted). I know that writing takes up such a huge chunk of time but I hope you do decide to try and finish your older story! Best of luck to you, and happy reading!

Reviewer: MissAbigailWeasley
Date: 07/04/11 9:26
Chapter: Chapter 4- Thoughts and Fights

I Love it!!! Next chapter please!

Reviewer: blackhair
Date: 01/14/10 5:54
Chapter: Chapter 4- Thoughts and Fights

Well i don't think Harry would have just let go of Ron when he was punched, since Harry is supposed to be most stubborn and easily angrier when somebody calls him a liar remember in fifth year he yelled back at Seamus when he called him liar

Reviewer: PotterGirl714
Date: 11/26/09 18:33
Chapter: Chapter 4- Thoughts and Fights

I love it! Please add more sooN!

Author's Response: haha, thanks for reviewing 3 times! yes, i am REALLY trying to get another chapter up....lets see how that goes...

Reviewer: PotterGirl714
Date: 11/26/09 18:32
Chapter: Chapter 4- Thoughts and Fights

I love it! Please add more sooN!

Reviewer: PotterGirl714
Date: 11/26/09 18:31
Chapter: Chapter 4- Thoughts and Fights

I love it! Please add more sooN!

Reviewer: alyssa_S
Date: 11/17/09 22:41
Chapter: Chapter 4- Thoughts and Fights

hey this story is going really well and i hope that the next chapters up soon.

Author's Response: thanks for the review! the next chapter SHOULD be *submitted* next week, but we all know how long that takes...

Reviewer: maisa potter
Date: 11/17/09 16:23
Chapter: Chapter 4- Thoughts and Fights

Love it... hope you upload the next chapter soon....

Author's Response: thanks for the review! the next chapter will hopefully be up MUCH sooner than that one took! but i have been swamped with hw this week, so maybe next week!

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 11/12/09 0:03
Chapter: Chapter 4- Thoughts and Fights

It was a good chapter. I will mention there was an instance when Burrow wasn't capitalised, (sorry one of my pet peeves). Otherwise moving as itwould have, in bits and piees. But it's time Harry declares himself to Ginny and the rest of the Weasleys.

Author's Response: thanks for the review, sorry i missed that word, spell check doesnt see it and i miss things sometimes. Personaly i cant belive someone is still reading this! THANKS!

Reviewer: Yellow Luna
Date: 10/27/09 18:03
Chapter: Chapter 3-Together and Apart

Write more.....

Author's Response: hmm...could give me a bit more of a review eh? sorry i have been QUITE busy lately, but the next chapter is on its way, going through a very thorough screening process. But things are starting to settle down, so i'll have my beta izzy look at it, and try submitting it again. DONT WORRY! I HAVE NOT FORGOTEN ABOUT THIS FIC!

Reviewer: Ginny4life
Date: 04/17/09 18:34
Chapter: Chapter 3-Together and Apart

tahat was awesome hurry with the next chapter PLEASE!!!!

Author's Response: i am working on the next chapter! i already have up to chapter 8 written, and am working on 9, but things are taking a while with the editing. i will try to submit 4th chapter over the weekend, so hopefully it will be up soonish.

Reviewer: Essence of Potter
Date: 03/10/09 14:58
Chapter: Chapter 3-Together and Apart

Wow. I've read a lot of post war Harry/Ginny storys but didn't really like any of them but this one is brilliant so far!
New chap soon please!

Author's Response: WOW! thanks for such a complement! we (Syd and i, see bio) are writting this story and have already written 9 chapters, it just takes a long time for them to go through the queue (if your terrible at grammar that is) so keep reading, keep reviewing, and we will write more!! -mury

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 03/09/09 0:07
Chapter: Chapter 3-Together and Apart


Author's Response: thats all you got? oh well, every review counts :) -m

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 03/09/09 0:02
Chapter: Chapter 2- Back to the Burrow

Not bad. Though I may not live long enough to read it. I'm old.

Author's Response: well im glad that you have started at least :) i hope you enjoy what you do read and i am sorry that it is taking so long to update chapters

You must login (register) to review.
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.

We have stories and authors in this archive.


Choose Theme:
Flowers in Winter by silverfirelizard53 6th-7th Years
She was a girl of exceptional talent and a kind heart, but she had been born...
Under the Southern Cross by FloreatCastellum 1st-2nd Years
Rolf Scamander has ventured to a remote archipelago to study a rare and exotic...
MOMENTS OF BLISS by moonymaniac 6th-7th Years
Remus Lupin is a man with a tragic past, filled with pain, suffering and sorrow...
Today Will Be Better, I Swear! by hestiajones 1st-2nd Years
'I'm going to miss you, Mr Ollivander,' said Luna, approaching the old man.'And...
Honestly by Gmariam 3rd-5th Years
Seven months after leaving Hogwarts, James Potter is fighting for the Order...