Reviews For Bittersweet
Reviewer: bling_baby
Date: 11/13/08 2:28
Chapter: One Gift of Clarity

Heya! OK, I was a bit worried at first, because it says that the story has been complete, but then I saw the next chapter so OK!

Great work! I wouldn't have thought of making it a 'you' story, but I like it! I'm glad to know that I left the bunny in such capable hands. x

Author's Response: Thanks! I changed it from complete! Thanks for pointing that out, if I'd have left it like that people really would have gotten confused, especially since the first chapter barely relates to the Wizarding world at all! The next chapter is still being written. I'm a very slow writer and a very busy person. I get around a couple of minuets a week in which I can write... But I have around 1000 words done... I have got her to the train station finally and soon I'll hopefully find the way to the train. Thanks for the review AND the plot bunny! Both are greatly appreciated! Thanks! Take care xx Chicklepea

Reviewer: helz_belz
Date: 11/12/08 2:00
Chapter: One Gift of Clarity

Oh wow, you have a fantastic writing style. I usually don't read fic's about OC's, but you drew me in from the word go. The second person narration works really well. Keep up the good work :)

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for the review! I'm so happy you like the style, I wanted something a little differant so that I could connect people to the OC better, and because it's fun to write!

Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 11/11/08 8:03
Chapter: One Gift of Clarity

I really like this story. It's very evocative and shows that just becasue someone's magic they can't avoid the pitfalls of drugs and society. Extremely well written too. Can't wait to read the rest of it - especially as you've promised some Marauder action.

Author's Response: Hey! Thankyou so much for the review! I'm glad you like the theme of the first chapter, there shouldn't really be anymore drug referances, I don't think, I just wanted to show Lucia's character as being a dumb teenager. And yes, definatly Marauder action in the next chapter! I'm a little scared of writing them though...

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