Reviewer: k_catherine
Date: 12/23/09 19:44
Chapter: Here's to The Death of My Heart

That was so sad! It was an amazing one-shot, but it was really sad. You did an amazing job of describing his sadness. Wow. It was heart-breaking.

Reviewer: azngurlwidhighlights
Date: 04/03/09 18:59
Chapter: Here's to The Death of My Heart

i know im being immature but that waz frigging awesome! i love ur perspective!

Reviewer: rushinn
Date: 12/24/08 1:14
Chapter: Here's to The Death of My Heart

Wow. That's all I can say. Soooo powerful. People call Ginny a Mary Sue and say that they despise her relationship with Harry, but your fic shows exactly why the two of them need to be together.

Very well written!

Reviewer: way 2 HP obsesed
Date: 11/09/08 13:17
Chapter: Here's to The Death of My Heart

it is really good...i mean, i hate ginny's guts here and all and its a horrible thing to imagine, but you wrote it really well...its harder to right sad stuff. but im all for emotion...hp gw 4eva

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Harry's perspective of this situation really made me hate Ginny too, but I know there's so much more to her side of it. If you haven't already, you should check out Torn Between Ice and Emeralds, a longer fic this one-shot is based off of. I appreciate your review!

Reviewer: ahattab33
Date: 11/09/08 8:20
Chapter: Here's to The Death of My Heart

Yea! I was glad you came through and wrote this! Poor Harry again...are you thinking about writing a sequel? Maybe Harry could be happy in the future...

Can I make a suggestion? I only read this because it was a one-shot that sounded interesting and none of the other stories I'm reading had updated, but then only after I clicked on it did it show that it was the companion piece to "Torn Between". You should put that in the summary so that those readers will know, 'cause it really doesn't make sense without it. Thanks again!

Author's Response: :-) I'm happy that you were watching for it! Once someone suggested the idea, I knew I had to write it. I am thinking about a sequel; I'm actually mapping it out right now. Not sure where to go with it, but it of course has to have more angst and heartache, or it just wouldn't be me! I'd really like to give Harry a happy ending, I've put him through a lot, but we'll see where the story goes. It'll take me some time. Thank you for the encouragement! Thank you very much for the suggestion. I've updated my summary; hopefully it'll be more informative! :-)

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