Reviewer: harrietamidala
Date: 12/10/08 1:33
Chapter: Picking Up the Pieces

Ginny's alive! That brings me so much relief. I really thought she died as well, but it is horrible to think that Harry would not know (for now).

Reviewer: yukikiyokiralacus
Date: 12/09/08 23:33
Chapter: A Tip

Wow, I like the idea that Mrs. Malfoy has changed. Whoever thought she would be giving Harry a warning. Well, can't wait for the next chapter! Hope it won't take to long for Harry to find out that Ginny is not dead!

Reviewer: yukikiyokiralacus
Date: 12/03/08 11:14
Chapter: Plans

The suspense is killing me! I hope you update soon and let us know who the antagonist is!

Reviewer: juli_dances
Date: 11/15/08 12:18
Chapter: Plans Interrupted

AHHHH!!! please post soon so I don't have to think too much about poor Ginny falling from a cliff! Your words are very descriptive-I can see the whole thing. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response:

Hi, Juli!  Thanks for the encouragement and I'll get the next chapter up as soon as it can be validated!

Reviewer: harrietamidala
Date: 11/12/08 8:58
Chapter: Plans

I have two questions--have you chosen your antagonist yet and how many chapters will you write for this story?

Author's Response: I have already written the first 7 chapters, as well as most of 8 and some of 9; and yes, I’ve known who the antagonist is right from when I started writing chapter 1.  I have planned out in my head what will happen in the middle of the story as well as how it is going to end, although the exact details tend to shift around a bit as the story progresses. However, at this point I don't know how many chapters the story will be.  Like I said, the plot is mapped out and I often find that once it is, the rest of the story pretty much writes itself.  So the length is really going to be dependent upon how the journey flows from my head to the keyboard.  That being said, I do think it will probably end up being at least 20 chapters.

Reviewer: harrietamidala
Date: 11/06/08 9:01
Chapter: Plans

oh, good story. This sounds premature, but I think I have a guess who the Death Eater might be--Barty Crouch Jr (Yes, I know the book canon stated that he was Kissed, but we don't see Barty after the so-called news. What if that was actually a cover-up for what really happened--escaped from Azkaban maybe).

Author's Response: Hmmmm...  Interesting idea and theory; but of course I really shouldn't comment at this point in the story, right?  :) 

Reviewer: Sdogg
Date: 11/04/08 4:34
Chapter: Plans

Haha, loving the intro! This story has definitely got potential - you have great writing skills, and an interesting plot! You are also writing the characters in a way I can imagine them acting - it makes me very happy to see the beginnings of an excellent story :D

Author's Response: I'm glad to hear you liked the intro and you feel I succeeded in writing everyone in character.  Thanks so much for reveiwing!

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