Reviews For Apparently Asleep
Reviewer: Fearthainn
Date: 10/12/10 15:05
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Old Flames

when are you updating?!!! Cuz now im obsessed

Author's Response: Sorry, I have other stories that I write for the board as well as on original fiction that I'm writing.editing etc. The next chapter heads my to-do list, so hopefully by the end of October, I'll have it up. Glad you're enjoying it. ~Carole~

Reviewer: Magic-62442
Date: 09/10/10 21:29
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Old Flames

I love this story so much! Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Thank you very much much. I appreciate the review. ~Carole~

Reviewer: hestiajones
Date: 09/02/10 1:18
Chapter: Chapter 1- Cool!

Great chapter, Carole!

Ahh...Now I see what you meant about Mary being unpopular here. Hahaha! I liked her here, though, because I love her in LOG. I thought she left him because he was a werewolf, but hmmm...Seems like Remus was being his annoying understanding self again?

This story may take ages to update :p, but it is actually picking up speed in content. Yay! I really can't wait for Sirius and Tonks to meet.

Oh! And Ted Tonks snore? Funny, I didn't know that. Hehe.

~Natalie.

P.S. A nice LOG update would make my week. Just saying.

Author's Response: You mean, Andromeda hasn't moaned about his snoring. Mary and Remus is .... complicated. But you'll need to carry on reading LOG to find out ... which reminds me, I should update. Darn Dramione taking over my life. Thank you!

Reviewer: Hermione759
Date: 09/01/10 21:02
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Old Flames

Please continue writing this it is Good!

Author's Response: I will. I love writing this too. ~Carole~

Reviewer: rosemerta
Date: 08/18/10 18:22
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Old Flames

That was a pleasant chapter. you went into detail at length about mary and remus, so can't help but wonder what mary's part in this story is and if this is the last we hear from her.

Author's Response: Very astute. It won't be the last we hear of her. Mary features in my main Marauder fic 'Lions of Gryffindor', where she's Remus' girlfriend. I'm rather fond of her, to be honest. Thanks for the review ~Carole~

Reviewer: AshTonks
Date: 08/16/10 17:02
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Old Flames

Errrr. Love Mary, but she better back off! Lol. Your chapters never disappoint! Best fanfic ever!

Author's Response: Awwwww, but Mary's his first love (read Lions of Gryffindor) You can't get in the way of first love ... can you? Hee hee Thanks ~Carole~

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 08/16/10 14:25
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Old Flames

I'm surprised and happy that this story is continuing.

Author's Response: OOOH, The story will continue. I have it planned right until the end. I just get distracted by other fics - sorry. Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 08/16/10 10:06
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Old Flames

:-) Two thumbs way up for this chapter!

Author's Response: Yay, thank you very much. I'm glad you liked the chapter. It took time, but I got their in the end. ~Carole~

Reviewer: ForeverFred
Date: 08/15/10 1:38
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Old Flames

Great chapter! I'm so happy you updated. :) I just hope Remus and Mary don't get too friendly...and that Tonks will forgive Remus soon. :) I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, sorry about the delay. I've come to the conclusion that I have far too many chaptered fics. This one and Lions of Gryffindor are my priorities though. Glad you liked this chapter. Oh, but Mary is lovely ... honest ... ~Carole~

Reviewer: tonkzie
Date: 08/14/10 2:59
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Old Flames

Ok, what to say... without growling in annoyance... ok, here goes. First of all, whoo hoo you updated, thank Merlin, I was going out of my mind. Not much Tonks in this one, quite a bit of Remus, which is cool. Now, Mary *growls* damn, I promised myself I wouldn't growl at you. Anyway, when your a mega Tonks fan like me, Remus kissing another woman is a big no-no. Of course I know they don't get together cause tonks and Remus end up together but still, Mary!! WHY her?! And what did she do to him all those years ago? And please tell me that Remus and Mary don't get together, please! ok, great chapter anywayz, tonkzie xx

Author's Response: I'm a canon girl at heart. I always will be and Remus belongs with Tonks - I know that. But ... I like Mary, too. She's in Lions of Gryffindor in case you're interested (as is a very giggly young Martha - he he he ) Glad you liked the chapter. OH and the next chapter is very much more Tonks. I can assure you of that. ~Carole~

Reviewer: Rosty
Date: 08/13/10 15:43
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Old Flames

WWWhat? no lupin and tonks??? no! ah well still good - i have to say i really like tonks and charlie. great job update soon!

Author's Response: Theres' a few things they need to get through before they're together. I can't make it too easy for them can I? Thank you for reading ~Carole~

Reviewer: AReader
Date: 08/13/10 13:08
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Old Flames

Wow, that was a good chapter! Please update often!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I will try to update as soon as I can, but unfortunately I get attacked by mad Kappa bunnies that make me write other things -EEEP!. Glad you like the fic. ~Carole~

Reviewer: hail_rowena
Date: 08/05/10 8:37
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Double Bluff

Gaaah, you must update this soon! I love this story so much! x x

Author's Response: Nest chapter is with my betas and will hopefully be up in the next week. Thank you so much for reviewing and I'm glad you like the story (but wonders what you'll think of Chapter 19 *sigh*) ~Catole~

Reviewer: ginnylunahermy
Date: 07/29/10 21:24
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Double Bluff

ok, so i luv this story, i really do! especially the first chapter, tonks is soooo cute! but please please please please please update faster!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I will try to update fster, but unfortunately I have another four chaptered fics (plus some original fiction) that I write at the same time, so I get behind *sigh*. I do love writing this story, though, so it will be updated. Thank you fro reviewing ~Carole~

Reviewer: LoveWeasleyTwins
Date: 07/23/10 3:51
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Double Bluff

Wow. This has been incredible! Not many fanfics lure me in enough to make me stay up until 3 in the morning, haha. Please post more soon!

Author's Response: Glad you were so enthralled, but hope you got to have a lie-in. I will start the next chapter very, very soon. I've been busy with other fics but will get onto this ASAP. Thank you ~Carole~

Reviewer: tonkzie
Date: 07/13/10 2:52
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Double Bluff

I hope you update soon, I really love this story

Author's Response: I will try, but have some others to update as well. Glad you're enjoying it and thanks for all the reviews. ~Carole~

Reviewer: SlytherinDaydreamer
Date: 07/05/10 17:22
Chapter: Chapter 1- Cool!

Loved this! Just brilliant! The dialogue with the marauders and Lily was perfection! Can't wait to read the rest!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I hope you enjoy the rest of the fic as much. ~Carole~

Reviewer: rosemerta
Date: 07/01/10 1:58
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Double Bluff

wow i really enjoyed it! really liked your aside where kingsley relays that he met james and sirius as boys. i find it strange though that he would turn in sirius and remus if he was in the order of the phoenix w them? i loved how you returned to canon and used the to be named Pigwidgeon, to deliver a message to remus and harry. -rOsE

Author's Response: Ah, No, he's not in the Order at the moment. Kingsley basically doesn't trust anyone (apart from Dumbledore and Moody) and he'd been working abroad at the time of the first war. He's suspicious of Tonks and Remus until he gets the all clear from Albus. Glad you're enjoying the fic though. Carole

Reviewer: kity1995
Date: 06/30/10 11:54
Chapter: Chapter 7 - Damsel in Distress

Amazing story so far and I can't wait to read more! Although I have a little complaint about the names: you should have used Alexandra instead of Alexandreina and I don't think I've ever met a Josef, but thinking that the dragons are in the mountains maybe you can get away with this one :D. I've really liked that you made Tonks thank Remus in romainiam. Good job!

Author's Response: OH, thank you. I was told that Alexandreina was a Romanian name, which was why I used it (and Josef as well), but the person that told me was half Romanian, so could well have been wrong. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks again ~Carole~

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 06/28/10 7:16
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Double Bluff

:-) Interesting how that encounter went! I appreciate the update lol

Author's Response: I appreciate the review. Thank you ~Carole~

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