Reviews For Apparently Asleep
Reviewer: U-No-Poo
Date: 04/25/10 1:33
Chapter: Chapter 17 - Interrogation

Oh my god, I'm still captivated! You're such a brilliant writer and everything! This is around about the time when Kingsley joins the Order, right? So I'm not too worried for Tonks, but instead anticipating the scenes that'll happen next, especially the conversation between Kingsley and Tonks next! Oh, but the Remus/Tonks thing is progressing far too slowly for my liking. It's not improved by the fact that it'll be another two and a half years before they're properly together! Keep writing and update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Hmmm, well the Order reforms after the end of book four, so there's another year yet ... Yeah it is progressing a tad slowly ... maybe things will speed up soon. (heh heh) ~Carole~

Reviewer: U-No-Poo
Date: 04/24/10 23:38
Chapter: Chapter 4 - Grudge Match

Omg so far, I am absolutely loving this fic! I'm completely captivated by the way you've written Lupin and Tonks so perfectly. Normally, I hate Remus/Tonks fics; they're normally so dry. However this has changed my belief that this ship is always the same dribble. You've written the story perfectly so far!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Mmm, Remus/Tonks shouldn't be dry. She's a fun girl! ~Carole~

Reviewer: U-No-Poo
Date: 04/24/10 23:24
Chapter: Chapter 11 -Old Stories and New Friends

DUN! DUN! DUN!!!!!! is just about right.

Author's Response: Yeah, I like my cliffs! Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 04/24/10 15:44
Chapter: Chapter 17 - Interrogation

Yay! An update. :) And a good one, too.

Kingsley is too smart. It's pretty annoying. Ahwell. I loved the Sirius/Remus parts.

Some typos though.

I dropped my wand and it sparked,” Missing punctuation. The same goes for here: “I’ve only got this lot left to sort through. Ollivander’s list was incredibly helpful. She opened the lid of ...

Great chapter and looking for an update!

Author's Response: Ta for the review. ~Carole~

Reviewer: xxbabewithbrainsxx
Date: 04/24/10 10:26
Chapter: Chapter 17 - Interrogation

Hmm...interesting. So what happens now? Is this the moment when Kingsley finds out that Sirius is innocent? Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Nor can I ...LOL. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Chalger
Date: 04/11/10 10:23
Chapter: Chapter 16 - Old Dogs and New Tricks

Wow, I love this, does it matter that I'm ridiculously tired from reading this all night? No, because this is soo good!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm pleased you enjoyed the story ... there should be a new chapter up very soon, so I hope you enjoy that too.

Reviewer: Ks11234rofl
Date: 04/05/10 8:22
Chapter: Chapter 16 - Old Dogs and New Tricks

Bravo bravo bravo!!!! *claps* your the best!

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: Ks11234rofl
Date: 04/04/10 18:44
Chapter: Chapter 10 - The Seeker

Haha soooo glad she broke up with rob!

Author's Response: Yeah, he was a jerk ... Thanks for the review

Reviewer: Ks11234rofl
Date: 04/03/10 20:04
Chapter: Chapter 5- Opportunities

Leave a review leave a review leave a reaveiw (great story by the way)

Author's Response: Er ... thanks for that ... I think ... Seriously, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: ginnylunahermy
Date: 03/30/10 11:21
Chapter: Chapter 1- Cool!

WOW! i loved this chapter. the ending was so cool, but so sad!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed Chapter one and I hope you enjoy the rest of it. ~Carole~

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 03/27/10 11:53
Chapter: Chapter 16 - Old Dogs and New Tricks

Loved this chapter!! Cannot wait for the next one :-)

Author's Response: I am writing it as we speak ... only another thousand words to go ... Thanks for the review and pleased you're enjoying the story. ~Carole~

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 03/27/10 11:39
Chapter: Chapter 15 - Truth Will Out

Yay! I finally got around to reading the updated chapter...wish life wasn't so busy sometimes...Awesome chapter :-)

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm currently writing the next chapter ... so hopefully it'll be up soon.

Reviewer: xxbabewithbrainsxx
Date: 03/21/10 5:22
Chapter: Chapter 16 - Old Dogs and New Tricks

Brilliant! I was never a great fan of R/T, but this story made me change my mind! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll try and get a new chapter out soon. ~Carole~

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 03/18/10 14:25
Chapter: Chapter 16 - Old Dogs and New Tricks

Sirius and Remus are back together. Tonks has rescued Sirius wand and managed to outwit Remus in the process. She's good at that 'cause she does 'spur of the moment' so well. Kissing Remus wasn't a bad thing.

Author's Response: Of course it wasn't a bad thing. She's Tonks, she can do no wrong!. Thanks for the review. ~Carole~

Reviewer: tonkzie
Date: 03/02/10 4:10
Chapter: Chapter 16 - Old Dogs and New Tricks

this was an amazing chapter, except I didn't get an email through saying it had been updated. Bummer! i'm now in lesson, reading this when i should be doing coursework, and I love it. tonks is amazingly brave, and i agree with remus. Hufflepuff? What was the hat thinking? Amazing amazing chapter!! truely inspiring, with you in spirit, tonkzie x

Author's Response: Thank you, Tonkzie. Mmm, the MNFF email system thing isn't working too well at the moment. I don't get emails that often either. Hopefully I'll have another chapter up at the end of this month - just to let you know. Glad you liked Tonks - especially at the end. Ah, I think the hat knew what it was doing. She's veryt brave but she's also incredibly loyal - especially to her family and that's the Puff in her. ~Carole~

Reviewer: Bean Si
Date: 02/27/10 19:28
Chapter: Chapter 1- Cool!

Hey, Equinox Chick,
love your stuff. I've been dipping in and out of these sites for a while - like yourself, I'm way beyond being young enough to be as much of HP fan as I am - but yours are the first stories that have rung true to me. PLEASE finish the chaptered fics, I'm on tenterhooks.

I have read all your recommended (favourite) stories and liked them all - must check out your reviews and see how that goes. I mean no disrespect to anyone when I say that a lot of the stories do not seem to chime with the characters I have loved in the books.

Anyway, just wanted to say: keep up the good work.

Bean Si

Author's Response: Thank you Bean Si, I'm older than the average HP fan too, but somehow I'm still obsessed. I will still keep writing the chaptered fics and I plan to finish them ... someday. Thanks again ~Carole~

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 02/20/10 22:28
Chapter: Chapter 16 - Old Dogs and New Tricks

EEP. The atmosphere you created with Sirius was just... it was so well done. Great chapter.
I wonder though, why does Dumbledore say 'stick' when he talks freely about the Ministry? And not that it matters, but how much Firewhiskey is in a bottle? It seems like they just kept on filling their glasses, and I think you said the bottle was half full/empty.
'I should be able to remember, he thought angrily. I’ve been here before, surely.'
Shouldn't 'I've been here before, surely.
be in italics too?'

I think I also spotted a few spacing errors, but that's no big deal :P

So. Update, please!

Author's Response: Yes it should be italicised - thanks for pointing that out. Sometimes I think I should keep my chapters to the 1500 mark and then I'd catch everything. Building a rod for my own back is the phrase that springs to mind. I also know about the line spacing. I'll sort that out very soon. Thanls for the review, Andi, and I'm pleased you're enjoying the story (plus keeping me on my toes) Dumbledore said 'stick' partly because he's enjoying the joke, and partly because he's leaving it up to Remus to tell Tonks what they're discussing. He's a wily old bird, is that Dumbledore. A bottle of firewhisky would be big (and it's also strong - like bourbon). Like a whisky bottle, it would hold enough for around 30 shots (which are very small measures). Thus, a half ful bottle could give at least 15 shots. Remus is pouring larger measures, but there's still enough left. I was a barmaid - I do know about drinking. ~Carole~

Reviewer: MetamorphmagusLupin
Date: 02/20/10 16:14
Chapter: Chapter 16 - Old Dogs and New Tricks

Yes, quite the wait, but this chapter was worth it. Excellently written. I absolutely love all the interactions you have between Remus and Tonks. They're so real and fun, but also entirely motivated within the story. I really enjoyed the conversation between Remus and Sirius--you can really tell that Sirius cares for Harry and I can see why he wouldn't want to be pent up in a house after all those years in solitary confinement. Great job! I look forward to another update. (Soon, hopefully) ;-)

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and I'll try to get the next one out a bit faster. ~Carole~

Reviewer: IckleRonnieX
Date: 02/20/10 15:28
Chapter: Chapter 16 - Old Dogs and New Tricks

WOWOWOW! Carole, this was amazing! I loved this chapter, definitely worth the wait! :D Can't wait till you update again! :)

Ronnie xxx

Author's Response: Thank you, Ronnie. I'll get the next chapter out asas. *adds to ever increasing list* I appreciate your comments. ~Carole~

Reviewer: The_Dream_Team
Date: 02/20/10 13:43
Chapter: Chapter 16 - Old Dogs and New Tricks

Wow! that was so good! i'm so glad that Sirius is back! and tonks is just about the coolest character ever! please update soon because i'm dying to see what happens next!!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing and I'm pleased the chapter has gone down well. Hopefully, I'm back in my Tonks groove now, and I can update quickly. ~Carole~

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