Reviews For Apparently Asleep
Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/23/14 15:10
Chapter: Chapter 21 - Work, Rest and Play

I've really enjoyed this story so far. I wish you'd finish it but I don't have much hope for you doing that. I usually don't read a story if it looks like it won't be finished but I like your writing so much that I am willing to read your unfinished work.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/23/14 14:44
Chapter: Chapter 20 - It's not only Bludgers that cause pain.

That was a great chapter! I could just feel what Tonks was feeling when Demelza innocently told her about her mom's new boyfriend--Remus. Being seen with Bill is good compensation, though.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/23/14 14:00
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Old Flames

This is such a coincidence. I have a daughter named Demelza and her father's middle name is Willard:D Too bad about Mrs. Pettigrew. I guess that even if Peter had come to visit her she wouldn't have remembered.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/23/14 13:29
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Double Bluff

I can imagine what happened when James and Sirius went to Petunia's wedding. No wonder she doesn't like magical people. I'm glad Kingsley turned out to be a good guy after all.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/22/14 17:55
Chapter: Chapter 17 - Interrogation

Oh no! I didn't expect Kingsley. In the movies they always showed him as a really nice guy. I suppose he does have to follow the rules though. Wasn't there a time when all of them, including Sirius, got together as the Order at Grimmauld Place? I guess you could've changed the story though.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/22/14 16:49
Chapter: Chapter 16 - Old Dogs and New Tricks

That was pretty ingenious getting Mundungus arrested so they could take his wand into the evidence area and remove Sirius' wand. That whole scene at the end was pretty funny.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/22/14 16:20
Chapter: Chapter 15 - Truth Will Out

I really liked this chapter but if I were to say something critical I'd say that it seemed a little rushed. On the other hand I don't see any reason for you to rewrite what JKR wrote either. What a hoot--they rolled into the river:D

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/19/14 17:43
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Disillusioned

Poor Charity. It's becoming more clear to everyone that Remus and Tonks have a good thing going. I hope you get to the part when people realize Sirius is back and he's not all bad. It seemed to me in the books that he was a "bad" wizard. Then, all of a sudden, he was back in everyone's good graces. I've always questioned that. There was a lot that JKR didn't explain but I hope you do.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/19/14 17:09
Chapter: Chapter 13 - Old Marauders Never Die

In hindsight, after we know what really happened, we realize that Sirius was after Scabbers. At the time, however, it looks like Sirius is very guilty. I love this perspective from Remus and Tonks. Too bad Tonks had to see Remus with Charity. I've always loved Harry's Patronus.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/19/14 15:34
Chapter: Chapter 12 Tea at the Tonks' House

What a wonderful chapter. I love seeing Sirius as Padfoot. It was great to see Tonks figure out that Sirius is Padfoot. I hope they get to see each other a little bit.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/19/14 14:20
Chapter: Chapter 11 -Old Stories and New Friends

It's true--you sometimes see people when you least expect them. Thanks for the time perspective. We're approaching Harry's third year. I can't wait to read your perspective on this year.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/19/14 13:01
Chapter: Chapter 10 - The Seeker

How exciting! Tonks got to meet Martha! I hope they can get together. People are starting to notice that Remus and Tonks are interested in each other. I didn't think things would work out with Rob. I'm glad they didn't.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/18/14 17:20
Chapter: Chapter 9 - The Raid

With Remus leaving Tonks at the lake as he did and making her feel like she was a nuisance, I don't think he has any claims on her heart and she should go out and have a good time. Once again I don't care for Proudfoot. I wonder if it's just his rubbish name:D

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/18/14 16:58
Chapter: Chapter 8 "Expecto Patronum!"

I know, I know. Can't Remus just let himself love her. It takes a few years if you use the canon timeline. I'm glad Tonks and Remus were able to spend that time together and that Tonks has her Patronus under control.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/18/14 14:59
Chapter: Chapter 7 - Damsel in Distress

I figured that Remus would be back but I was still surprised to see him when I did. I thought for sure that Charlie had come back from the lake. I'm so happy that Remus and Tonks were able to see each other again.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/18/14 14:02
Chapter: Chapter 6 - Old Mad-Eye

I felt a brief shudder when I thought of Andromeda destroying Tonks' beloved picture. I think Tonks needs to know about her family history. I love Mad-Eye!

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/18/14 13:17
Chapter: Chapter 5- Opportunities

I think I know where Remus has gone. I almost hate to see Charlie turn down the Quidditch deal but I guess he has to do what he wants. So this is where he decides to work with dragons?

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/17/14 18:24
Chapter: Chapter 4 - Grudge Match

Well, Harry survived falling off his broom several times so I'm sure that Tonks will make it. I became so excited by the match that I almost found myself cheering for Tonks along with her House.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/17/14 17:38
Chapter: Memories and Revelations

I really enjoyed this chapter. I'm sad that Tonks broke up with Charlie but the feelings were not mutual. It's best to just move on. It was also sad when Snape obviously saw Lily in Tonks' auburn hair. It's fun to see the beginnings of love stir between Tonks and Remus.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 09/17/14 15:13
Chapter: Chapter 2- More of a Miss than a Kiss

I guess if Charlie's going to ask an uncomfortable question he might get an uncomfortable answer. It's hard to be sneaky around a werewolf. They seem to hear everything.

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