Ruthie! *tacklehugs*
I know this got accepted ages ago, but I'm so glad to see it up!
It's an amazing story, I hope you get more reviews!
Your beta whenever you need one--Sara!
Author's Response: Thank you so much Sara! *tacklehugs right back* You're the best beta EVER!
Yay! Yeah, I want to get started on my own fic, but I have to finish too. :( I'm still doing my outline... I finished I, II, III, and IV only!! Ahhhh! I'm never going to finish!
I can't wait to see what you come up with when you get a chance though! YAY!
Author's Response: I get to read your when you're done. :)
I love it so much! It's really great. The only thing is that maybe you could lengthen it a little -- talk more about the conflict/tension between them about the magic/werewolf idea -- I find it unrealistic there wouldn't have built up tension after he left for Hogwarts, with her wanting to know what's going on, etc., thinking something's strange -- have some more tension between them leading up till then, and just in general, a few more personal scenes as opposed to the way you just sort of floated through with narration paragraphs. I want more of HIM in the story, more of his character, and more real interaction between them. And, a better way to show how much they care. The scene in the forest was very emotional, very intense and I really felt it there, but there should be more of that in the story.
Wow, I sound like an English teacher. Didn't mean to go all Mattesky on you...
<3 Fredhead
Author's Response: Yay! A review! How simply lovely! Hmmm....I wonder who it's from... I see your point, and now I feel the need to run back to my computer (I guess that would involve running in a circle) and adding a million new words to the story. Unfortunately, there is a surprisingly lengthly essay waiting to be done (darn those English teachers) about our favorite book. Anyway, I simply love English teacher like reviews, Freddy-May! They are the best kind! I thank you humbly! --Ruthie
I wasn't going to read this, because I don't like Fenrir (who does?), but - obviously - I read it anyway ... and it was simply beautiful. It made me cry.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :)
