Reviews For I Solemnly Swear
Reviewer: Sailing Girl
Date: 01/03/11 12:23
Chapter: Chapter One, Plethora of Feelings.

Good, a bit confused on surnames, but that might just be me ;)

Reviewer: TheCursedQuill
Date: 05/28/09 22:21
Chapter: Chapter One, Plethora of Feelings.

Hi Mila!

Your story is really good so far! It's very interesting and I can't wait to read more! I loved your OC Tabitha, she was very believable as a character and I can definitely see her as Lily's friend. I like the little reply Lily gives James in the very beginning as well, it perfectly shows the kind of relationship they have. I also liked your take on the before and after Snape's Worst Memory, however I think that Lily would have taken it a bit harder. I imagined her to cry, after all this was one of her best friends who insulted her, and to just brush it off with transfiguration was a little out of character for me. This was the only thing that stood out to me though, the rest of it being fantastic! Keep up the good work, and I hope you have as much fun writing their next years as I will reading them!

Reviewer: Black-Sand
Date: 11/02/08 22:40
Chapter: Chapter One, Plethora of Feelings.

G'day

i like your story! the job option for Lily ws very funny!

cant wait for the next one XD

...xXxBlack-SandxXx...

Author's Response: Yay, first reviewer! Thank you and I hope you continue reading :)

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