Woah, well done!! I really loved the begining because it was confusing and yet it was meant to be confusing because a Dementor has no gender and no family and no name etc. And I loved how you described her memories coming back to her slowly. And the Sirius Black part was unexpected and yet SEAMLESS. Very, very hauntingly well done!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much! Phew, I hoped that the Sirius Black part wasn't too subtle (but then again, that's me, I always worry things are too subtle even when they're staring me in the face!). Oh, I'm just so happy to hear you enjoyed it!
This is very good. I couldn't work out where you were going with this at all. It was depressing (in a good way) at the beginning but I thought the end was so uplifting. Interesting and well written.
Author's Response: Thanks Carole! I'm glad it made sense in the end :) I was worried it was just so strange it wouldn't work! Thanks a million for reviewing.