Reviewer: hollipop102994
Date: 07/26/09 23:37
Chapter: Act 2: The Stage

I L O V E this story! Way to go! Write more please :)

Reviewer: sam_1034_lily
Date: 10/28/08 16:50
Chapter: Act 2: The Stage

i liked it a lot update soon

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 10/17/08 19:35
Chapter: Act 1: The Set-up

Although your introduction sets up a contrast between the two sisters, to me there is the unanswered question: What the heck happened to Pansy? And how did Draco get together with Daphne to begin with?

Also I think Draco's characterisation is a little sparse. In some ways it doesn't seem like Draco at all. Yes he's fascinated with Astoria, but to my mind it's no odder than him dating Daphne. I hope future chapters explain what happens to him after the downfall of Voldemort.

Reviewer: roaringruthie125
Date: 10/17/08 18:48
Chapter: Act 1: The Set-up

This was really good. I can't wait to see where it goes :)

Reviewer: helz_belz
Date: 10/17/08 16:37
Chapter: Act 1: The Set-up

A good start to what seems like an interesting fic. I have always liked that verse by William Shakespeare, and clicked on this story straight away when I read it. I'm glad I did, it looks like it will be great :)

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