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Name: hollipop102994 (Signed) · Date: 07/26/09 23:37 · For: Act 2: The Stage
I L O V E this story! Way to go! Write more please :)

Name: sam_1034_lily (Signed) · Date: 10/28/08 16:50 · For: Act 2: The Stage
i liked it a lot update soon

Name: rambkowalczyk (Signed) · Date: 10/17/08 19:35 · For: Act 1: The Set-up
Although your introduction sets up a contrast between the two sisters, to me there is the unanswered question: What the heck happened to Pansy? And how did Draco get together with Daphne to begin with?

Also I think Draco's characterisation is a little sparse. In some ways it doesn't seem like Draco at all. Yes he's fascinated with Astoria, but to my mind it's no odder than him dating Daphne. I hope future chapters explain what happens to him after the downfall of Voldemort.

Name: roaringruthie125 (Signed) · Date: 10/17/08 18:48 · For: Act 1: The Set-up
This was really good. I can't wait to see where it goes :)

Name: helz_belz (Signed) · Date: 10/17/08 16:37 · For: Act 1: The Set-up
A good start to what seems like an interesting fic. I have always liked that verse by William Shakespeare, and clicked on this story straight away when I read it. I'm glad I did, it looks like it will be great :)

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