I L O V E this story! Way to go! Write more please :)
i liked it a lot update soon
Although your introduction sets up a contrast between the two sisters, to me there is the unanswered question: What the heck happened to Pansy? And how did Draco get together with Daphne to begin with?
Also I think Draco's characterisation is a little sparse. In some ways it doesn't seem like Draco at all. Yes he's fascinated with Astoria, but to my mind it's no odder than him dating Daphne. I hope future chapters explain what happens to him after the downfall of Voldemort.
This was really good. I can't wait to see where it goes :)
A good start to what seems like an interesting fic. I have always liked that verse by William Shakespeare, and clicked on this story straight away when I read it. I'm glad I did, it looks like it will be great :)