Reviews For Lace
Reviewer: Petit Bread
Date: 11/04/08 10:49
Chapter: Lace

This story is so sweet. I love it!
Liquid_silver you have written such a wonderful story!

Author's Response: Thankies!

Reviewer: helz_belz
Date: 10/04/08 19:42
Chapter: Lace

Ted and Andromeda are fast on their way to becoming my OTP and this was one of the better fics I have read about them. It was suttle and beautiful, I think using the second person narration gave it a little something extra.

I love the idea of Andromeda running out on her wedding. Gah, and the way you wrote it is too good for words.

And I loved Ted's eye at the end - crying or drinking - it was a great why to describe his anguish too. Sorry for my crazy review rant. I'll just go put this on my favourites list and leave you alone...

Author's Response: No, I don't mind at all. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: tc015
Date: 09/30/08 17:59
Chapter: Lace

Wow! I love Andromeda/Ted, and it's great to read something different; the second-person POV really makes it unique.

I love the use of the second-person; it really allows you to get into Andromeda's head and see her thoughts. Her feelings are so realistic; you understand her pain at having to marry this man she doesn't love.

Even in her haughtiness, your mother looked beautiful. Beautiful and cold and hard – like a diamond.
I loved this description; it's interesting how used a diamond to symbolize her mother. I've seen diamonds used to symbolize beauty, but seeing it used to also describe coldness makes it fresh and new.

I wonder who the groom is supposed to be; is it meant to be a random pureblood or did you have a particular character in mind while you were writing this?

Overall, I really liked this; I can't wait to read more of your fics.

~ Teresa

Author's Response: Wow, I'm so glad you liked it! I wasn't sure I could pull off the second-person point of view, so thanks for telling me you thought I did that well. As to your query, I just meant it as a random pureblood, most likely from a wealthy and respected family. I didn't have anyone in mind, 'cause I didn't really think it made a difference who it was.

Reviewer: Fred and Georgie
Date: 09/27/08 19:20
Chapter: Lace

Sorry, yeah it was really good, very professional soounding. i think you should add more. :)

Author's Response: Thank you. =-]

Reviewer: Fred and Georgie
Date: 09/27/08 18:12
Chapter: Lace

HOW IN THE WORLD CAN YOU SUBMIT THIS?????

i thought the que was closed until the 8th?

Author's Response: I'd already submitted it before they closed the queue. Any comments on the story itself?

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