This story is so sweet. I love it!
Liquid_silver you have written such a wonderful story!
Author's Response: Thankies!
Ted and Andromeda are fast on their way to becoming my OTP and this was one of the better fics I have read about them. It was suttle and beautiful, I think using the second person narration gave it a little something extra.
I love the idea of Andromeda running out on her wedding. Gah, and the way you wrote it is too good for words.
And I loved Ted's eye at the end - crying or drinking - it was a great why to describe his anguish too. Sorry for my crazy review rant. I'll just go put this on my favourites list and leave you alone...
Author's Response: No, I don't mind at all. Thanks so much!
Wow! I love Andromeda/Ted, and it's great to read something different; the second-person POV really makes it unique.
I love the use of the second-person; it really allows you to get into Andromeda's head and see her thoughts. Her feelings are so realistic; you understand her pain at having to marry this man she doesn't love.
Even in her haughtiness, your mother looked beautiful. Beautiful and cold and hard – like a diamond.
I loved this description; it's interesting how used a diamond to symbolize her mother. I've seen diamonds used to symbolize beauty, but seeing it used to also describe coldness makes it fresh and new.
I wonder who the groom is supposed to be; is it meant to be a random pureblood or did you have a particular character in mind while you were writing this?
Overall, I really liked this; I can't wait to read more of your fics.
Author's Response: Wow, I'm so glad you liked it! I wasn't sure I could pull off the second-person point of view, so thanks for telling me you thought I did that well. As to your query, I just meant it as a random pureblood, most likely from a wealthy and respected family. I didn't have anyone in mind, 'cause I didn't really think it made a difference who it was.
Sorry, yeah it was really good, very professional soounding. i think you should add more. :)
Author's Response: Thank you. =-]
HOW IN THE WORLD CAN YOU SUBMIT THIS?????
i thought the que was closed until the 8th?
Author's Response: I'd already submitted it before they closed the queue. Any comments on the story itself?